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Saswat777 — future's bright
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Published: 2010-10-09 06:50:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1074; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 17
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Hope their future isn't as colorless :')
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Taken in Balarampur Village.
This primary school observed its centennial anniversary last year.
Totally enjoyed spending some time with the kids.
Wish i knew Bengali bit well.
Please do critique/ comment!
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You have done a nice job with this image, under very difficult photographic conditions. Getting a group shot to work out with adults is difficult, but with children; impossible. A more uniform background would have been nice. The lighting is quite harsh and some of the highlights looklike they have been blown out. The image is a bit flatter than I would do it. Adjusting the contrast a little bit would give this image more "pop".
What to look for in future shots like this; the boy at the right front does not seem to be quite in focus and his hair blends into the dark area in the background. The boy in the middle has most of his face hidden. Had he been in the gap between the two boys in the front, this would not have been a problem.
The girl on the left is positioned in such a way that it looks like the support pillar is coming out of her head.
I like this image, but there are a few things you should try to correct the next time.
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Hello Manfred,
Thanks for taking out some time for posting such a detailed, constructive critique. Much appreciated. Will definitely keep in mind all the points you have mentioned.
Thanks again!
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You are quite welcome. I really liked the image when I saw it, but saw a few things that you need to pay attention to when shooting.
Keep up the great work!
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Honored to be there!
Thank you
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If the christian god existed these kids would have the same opportunities like I had.
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Err sorry didn't get you...
are you an athist? or a believer?
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saswat, you've been featured here : [link]
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i love the innocence in their expressions....especially the guy at the center
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Really a great capture.. u can sense the innocence in their smile.. love tis...
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Really a great capture.. u can sense the innocence in their smile.. love tis...
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you're faster than flash
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well, from the brightness of their eyes, I can say they still have dreams *beautiful one* and spirits about their future 
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Thank you!
And really sorry for getting back so late
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You're welcome 
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