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gayglass [2016-08-16 02:08:23 +0000 UTC]

OM,, G SA THIS MIGHT BE MY FAV OF YOUR OCS 
also i read cole's critique abd (a++ cole u did good) i agree w what theyre sayin!! D ONT LISTEN TO ME THOUGH BC MY STYLE IS V REALISTIC (i try at least) AND URS IS KINDA CARTOON/ANIMEISH WHICH IS RLLY COOL BUT ILL TRY

one big word of advice,, which doesn't really apply to all styles but most styles,, eyes are not as big as you think they are. 90% of the time ppl draw them bigger than theyre supposed tso it would rlly help to look at TONS of refs and look at toher ppl that have similar styles. you have a really distinct style bc of lineart and the way you color stuff which is super rad but ppl are always changing!! at the moment, for your style, im afraid to say anything because mine is so different from yours and i dont want to influence your style??? it would be better to listen to people like cole because their styles are simi;ar to yours. i think mayb you should try to fix up the hands a little bc it seems like the hands in this picture are cupped?? it's good to practice drawing hands on their own, just to get a feel of how to draw fingers and make them look natural u kno?? you should experiment with different styles and ways of colouring to deveolp a personalized style that youre comfortable drawing with,, and i know you're pretty young so you have a long way to go!! and that's ok!!! there's nothing wrong with your style now, but there are definitely things you could improve on, like everybody else in the world!!! ur doing great i look forward to seeing you improve!! (a';so i just thought of something,, you should aslo try to draw pl in different poses, i've noticed that a lot of your drawings have people in the same poses, which is totally rad, but it's good to have some variety ykno) 
I REALLY HOPE I DIDNT HURT YOUR FEELINGS I MEAN ALL OF THIS IN THE NICEST WAY POSSIBLE AND YOURE GORGEOUS AND TALENTED AND AWESOME KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MY DUDE;

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candylabrum [2016-08-15 01:37:32 +0000 UTC]

wow this is great! :'D It's a neat looking gemstone to use as well, I've never heard of it before this, actually :0c

I need to redraw my gemsona's ref haha

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satalightes [2016-08-12 14:09:30 +0000 UTC]

;aaAA YES I REALLY LIKE THE COLOUR SCHEME
ALSO CRITIQUE TIME BECAUSE I READ YOUR JOURNAL SO OKAY
maybe try cleaning up the colouring a bit more so it wont show outside of the lineart like around the hair and around the dress for example also if your lineart were smoother it would be more aesthetically pleasing., try upping the correction a bit and keep a steadier hand?? yeah also one more thing, you dont need to take this into consideration because i know this is just according to people's styles, but maybe try closing the lines a BIT more? not too much but yknow its just my opinion and personal preference  to draw my lines mostly closed and i know a lot of people choose and prefer open lines and i still find it very nice and none of these things im asking you to change and just recommending i guess ALSO IM SORRY I DONT MEAN ANY HARM OR OFFENSE IM SORRY AGAIN

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Scorched-Violet [2016-08-11 23:17:24 +0000 UTC]

I love her, she's pretty! <3 And seems like a cool character. Also neat weapon 

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