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Published: 2011-03-19 18:03:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 597; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Comments: 3

woohooligan [2011-03-20 05:05:27 +0000 UTC]

Love the strip!

The text on the bottom of panel 2 is a little difficult for me to read... a slightly larger font would probably work, but I think personally I would probably try white with no outline first. I think the background down there is dark enough for that to work.

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Savarama In reply to woohooligan [2011-03-21 07:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your thoughts! I agree, looking back on it, that's a bit hard to read. I also think that could use more leading.

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woohooligan In reply to Savarama [2011-03-21 11:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Any time.

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