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Published: 2009-04-21 05:48:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1019; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 46
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Please download the large size for more details!With more help and study, practice on other projects I quickly revisited this piece and what a difference some more knowledge and experience brings.
No, I don;'t plan on being a chronic noodling re-doer but this one had some much potential for improvement.
Thanks for looking and commenting as always.
Cheers,
Lin.K
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Personally? I would leave the aircraft as they are, I think they help create a sense of depth in the image, and in my opinion you have already produced enough detail on them to make them stand out well. I think with the walker in the foreground, you could just add hints of detail here and there, a piece of mechanical equipment, some light hitting a smooth surface of it, maybe even a light in the darker area? like a infra red target light or something? The clouds I think you could just lighten the left edges of the cloud just to hint at the strongest source of daylight coming from that direction
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this is looking pretty sharp, the big plus for me in this is the aircraft. There is a good level of detail on them and the lighting to their rear has worked really well. The engine lights from the back of them has contrasted really well compared to the rest of the image which has a more pastel feel to it.
good job
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very insightful feedback, cheers derbz! Glad you like the contrasting textures and details. I have a request by a friend to redux some of this, blow up the size of the close aircraft and maybe the walker in the foreground and light up the clouds more. Think it will work?
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hey, thanks for the positive comments and fave on this one, much appreciated. Also a kind of Tokyo scene, your guy is patrolling the streets down below.
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this is fantastic! keep up the great work!!!
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thank you so much and yep, am working on another one now!
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