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ScarletsFeed — Why Does the Sun Cry? {Elements of War}

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Published: 2017-07-09 19:03:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 958; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 16
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There you were
So distant from my life
Yet so near in my eyes

I hear your one special laugh
Yet you're weeping inside

But you're no ordinary soul
Coz you can touch someone's life

....with your smile...

I know
You're heart's been badly hurt

I wish that I could be there
.....and be your friend.....

So you don't have to pretend
if things don't feel alright

You sang a song
So full of emotions
It made everybody cry

But do they know
What lies behind your song?

A sad story, just like mine

I wish that I were close
I wish that you could know

A sadder story, and terrible pain of mine....
... that now, I have given unto you.

The guilt, I know it's mine

When the creatures of the east, look up into that red, dying sky
And the young looks to the old, with wide, glistening eyes
And asks, their voice low, innocence in itself

"Why Does the Sun Cry?"

No one knows, but I

That terrible pain
Knowing you've made one you love suffer

And knowing, this darkness

.... It's all fault of mine


.:+:.




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So this was something I started WAAAY back, but I put lots of effort into it, then abandoned it. So, since I didn't want it to go to waste, I decided to finish it a bit, and post it.

Some more MLP: Elements of War
Here we are with Nightmare Flare- Or 'Solar Flare'
Solar Flare doesn't feel empathy or emotion, and is in reality a numb shell driven on chaos and anger. She strikes out at Celestia, who nurtured her as a foal and taught her Magic as a student, though in truth she attacks without knowing quite why she's so angry with the Sun Princess.

But Celestia knows why all too well.

Poem Based from: www.poemhunter.com/poem/when-t…
I edited it and added my own parts, so copyright to Author for whatever I used.

I'm not too worried about it, since this is just personal work, and not commercial ^w^


OC Shown:



Art, OC, Story, Elements of War, Solar Flare all to Me
Celestia and MLP to Hasbro

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Comments: 9

ShaleZookeeper7 [2018-01-12 20:49:09 +0000 UTC]

The Goddess of the Sun vs the Goddess of Flames...

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ChaosPhantom444 [2017-07-10 06:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Good poem.
Reminds me of a commissioned artwork of mine.

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ScarletsFeed In reply to ChaosPhantom444 [2017-07-10 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah, really? ^w^

Which one? ^^

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ChaosPhantom444 In reply to ScarletsFeed [2017-07-10 18:05:23 +0000 UTC]

chaosphantom444.deviantart.com…

Although yours is more personal pain to the princess then this one.

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jolliapplegirl [2017-07-10 04:35:35 +0000 UTC]

For a second there, I mistook the crown for a middle finger.

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ScarletsFeed In reply to jolliapplegirl [2017-07-10 17:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Lol, yeah I can see it! XD

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dragongirl0130 [2017-07-09 20:45:00 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome!
That that hiar! I live it ^.^

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ScarletsFeed In reply to dragongirl0130 [2017-07-10 17:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~! <3

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dragongirl0130 In reply to ScarletsFeed [2017-07-11 01:30:50 +0000 UTC]

No problem <3
I jsut saw my spelling, oh god xD

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