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capanmarea [2014-04-22 00:42:02 +0000 UTC]
ships of the class were able to remain operational despite sustaining breaches to all compartments and losing 90% of their armor.
ships of the class were able to remain operational despite sustaining breaches to all compartments and losing 90% of their armor.√√√√
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capanmarea [2014-04-22 00:41:30 +0000 UTC]
how much
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Sequito-Equitis [2012-09-26 15:55:21 +0000 UTC]
I like the way you used influences from the medical vessel from "All Good Things" in ST:TNG and the freighter originally seen in the Star Trek cartoon (but now making an appearance in the new HD ST:TOS re-release in "Charlie-X").
My only caveat, and I wouldn't call it a negative, is that the secondary hull has enough rows of windows to suggest as many as ten decks (not counting the saucer section). That is still a "tall ship."
You may have missed an opportunity portray something that would look perfectly at home on screen with existing canon but at the same time is believable as being rather small compared to the TOS Enterprise. You rarely see people even try that, much less succeed.
With this shape you could probably sell me on as few as six decks total, including the saucer, if there weren't so many rows of windows.
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Habatchii [2012-02-13 19:24:29 +0000 UTC]
Habatchii says;
very well...
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dantrekfan48 [2011-08-30 00:22:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh my. That's original, in a good way I mean.
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