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Scotty-Lad In reply to dianos [2008-04-06 13:54:38 +0000 UTC]
It will be colored, but on a poster. It's a school project.
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luminariasellaiia [2008-04-06 06:00:49 +0000 UTC]
thats funny and really good
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angelobelmont [2008-04-05 22:07:04 +0000 UTC]
Good work! I like it!
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BalloonPrincess [2008-04-05 20:14:26 +0000 UTC]
Looks really good to me. Various panels and good staging. No usage of arrows and good panel design. Lot's of good things happening here, though why turn it on the side?
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Scotty-Lad In reply to BalloonPrincess [2008-04-05 20:28:54 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem. I had to separate those panels into parts, because they are all on one page, and the scanner couldn't fit the entire page.
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AtomicTiki [2008-04-05 19:48:31 +0000 UTC]
Excellent comic, from the writing I could tell they were in a video game and the actual sight gag used on the attack / discovery of some kind of game glitch was just set up brilliantly.
An excellent start.
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Scotty-Lad In reply to AtomicTiki [2008-04-05 19:50:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, they're TRAPPED in a video game...
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AtomicTiki In reply to Scotty-Lad [2008-04-05 19:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Gotta say, I'm lovin' the concept!
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Granitoons [2008-04-05 18:56:24 +0000 UTC]
Really good work - only thing I'd change is maybe make the space between the frames a bit bigger? The staging and viewpoints are perfect as are the panel shapes.
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Scotty-Lad In reply to Granitoons [2008-04-05 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Well, it's a sketch. I'll see what I can do when I put it on the poster.
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Scotty-Lad In reply to Granitoons [2008-04-05 19:01:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks pal. I'll put up part 2 soon.
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Granitoons In reply to Scotty-Lad [2008-04-05 19:03:08 +0000 UTC]
You're still on me watch list so you needn't worry about noting me. The watchlist glitch also seems to be fixed.
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Scotty-Lad In reply to Granitoons [2008-04-05 19:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Okay. I just want you see more of my work. Part 2 will have one panel, because the paper is too big for the scanner.
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Granitoons In reply to Scotty-Lad [2008-04-05 19:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Try and see if the stitch option works. That's how I upload big pictures, like my model sheets (drawn on A3 paper)
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Scotty-Lad In reply to Granitoons [2008-04-05 19:49:40 +0000 UTC]
Stitch option? Is that on MS paint?
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Granitoons In reply to Scotty-Lad [2008-04-05 20:46:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure. It's on !Photo Plus.
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Scotty-Lad In reply to Granitoons [2008-04-05 20:49:07 +0000 UTC]
I don't have that. Aw, beaver dam.
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