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Cyber-Cypher [2017-06-03 04:00:09 +0000 UTC]

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Hello there!

Good Points:

- This is a good first attempt at drawing people! The style is very simple and is like a typical chibi style or a cartoonish style! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

- I like this very surrealistic background. I like your use of dark colors to create this dark atmosphere and compliments the subject of this artwork. (Which is about discovering your dark side.)

Improvements/Suggestions:

- The Chara reflection is not aligned with Frisk. It should be slanted more to the right. Here's a reference to help understand what I'm saying: www.google.com/search?q=reflec… :
It's a long link but it should show you lots of references photos.

- The center of the artwork needs to stand out more (In this case, it's the characters and their reflection.) The background is taking up most of the space of the artwork. But if you give more space to the characters, then people are likely to be drawn to the characters

Hope this helps! ^_^

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TheFanta-syLife [2017-05-12 01:17:16 +0000 UTC]

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for your first time drawing humans, i gotta say that this is pretty well made. the idea to have chara's eyes to be completely red and have a red aura around it in a normally blue area does make it have that serious feel to it. the only things i would have to say about this piece is the fact that frisk has their eyes open. you should already know that frisk has their eyes closed and all so thats one of the few things that bugged me, a way to put in some expression despite having their eyes closed is to add in eye wrinkles and eye brow movement with a surprised mouth. another thing i did like is the flowers and how they glow. it has this nice aura effect to it that was never shown in the original game itself. other wise, great piece and i hope great artwork from you in the future

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Elvinkin66 [2017-05-12 19:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Chara is always with you.

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FrancistheDragon [2017-05-12 05:36:05 +0000 UTC]

This looks so beautiful! I'm sorry, but I can't believe that this is supposed to be a first attempt at drawing humans...
Still, I love the background because one can really see it's inside a cave and not beneath the sky, and the red glow gives the whole scene a menacing touch, which fits the way Frisk sees Chara in her reflection. All in all awesome, keep up the great work!

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JMLemmon [2017-05-12 00:25:16 +0000 UTC]

  It's beautiful!

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