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Published: 2015-01-01 03:54:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1132; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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The capillary rasp of tongues,I know nothing but chattering
As warm air trades its place with young;
A shiver starts resurfacing
Within the walls of little lungs.
I know nothing but chattering,
Wintery gust I taste your braid;
A shiver starts resurfacing
As degrees fall in centigrade,
The weaving wind is circling.
Wintery gust I taste your braid
Within the walls of little lungs,
As degrees fall in centigrade
The capillary rasp of tongues
Will end all things that I have said.
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Hi Sedahliah, this piece has been featured as a part of Octacula projectdfc.deviantart.com/blog… in ProjectDFC and also in my journal kiwi-damnation.deviantart.com/… . Thank you for writing such a great piece.
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That form is one I've never really seen used before so it was definitely interesting from that perspective. Your word choice is very evocative, and you've used your structure to maximum potential. A very lovely, poignant piece. Steller job.
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Much thanks for the favorite and taking time to comment.
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