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Published: 2015-12-10 18:37:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 413; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Arms like diesel engines churning, artificial.Roses' yearning, strength in beauty worn by violent
Marks as vigils spark a wreckage, slowly fighting;
Somewhere out there, redefining where the sky went.
Now in silence, mouths like mirrors cutting winter,
Soft attention paid to statements non-transparent.
Stabilizing rising flames of atom blossoms,
Someone out there deems disaster now inherent.
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Comments: 3
Focused on the sounds,
it's lyrical, Rick.
Unless I'm missing something,
perhaps 'violence' in place of
'violent'? [rhymes not needing
to be exact].
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I re-read a large portion of what I write aloud so I guess that's where the lyrical attention comes from.
Yeah that portion does seem to sound wrong now that I reflect on it. Perhaps an edit is called for. Thanks for pointing it out.
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