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Naru's shirt is too long for a tucked one. XDDD;; I saw my mistake when I read through one of the volumes and saw Yasuhara's tucked shirt.. and... yeah. XDDD;; I was already done drawing by that time so I didn't care to change it anymore.

The color on Mai's and Naru's faces is a little smudged with black ink 'cause Prisma markers make ballpoints bleed. I tried to fix it by coloring it over with colored pencils...it didn't work too well.

There's too much space on Mai's side... I really need to practice estimating blank spaces correctly. -___-;;;

Ohhh and... those are Lin's shiki circling them.

Naru, Mai, Lin's shiki (heh) (c) Shiho Inada & Fuyumi Ono
Art (c) (me!)

Description
Artist's comments! READ BEFORE YOU CRITIQUE

Naru's shirt is too long for a tucked one. XDDD;; I saw my mistake when I read through one of the volumes and saw Yasuhara's tucked shirt.. and... yeah. XDDD;; I was already done drawing by that time so I didn't care to change it anymore.

The color on Mai's and Naru's faces is a little smudged with black ink 'cause Prisma markers make ballpoints bleed. I tried to fix it by coloring it over with colored pencils...it didn't work too well.

There's too much space on Mai's side... I really need to practice estimating blank spaces correctly. -___-;;;

Ohhh and... those are Lin's shiki circling them.

Naru, Mai, Lin's shiki (heh) (c) Shiho Inada & Fuyumi Ono
Art (c) (me!)