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Published: 2003-12-11 02:39:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 38
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Siphon in a wedding dress. ^_^ I drew it in therapy... Had horrible AFI song stuck in head. >_@;Related content
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Thank you; I think it's terrible, but I'm glad someone doesn't. Ha ha! Ummm... You rather mystified me with your comment before, I must admit...
--S.
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X3 I'm SO glad you got around to drawing Siphon in a wedding dress... ^_^ I'm actually working on Callie in a tux, right now. 
Siphon is uber-gorgeous, as always, and I really like what you did with the background. Very neat-o. X3
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you have an interesting inking style. with some work, it will be greatness.
hmmm... how best to describe this... well, there are only three places on this peice i'd like to point out:
1.) her left hand, pointy-handstlye notwithstanding, the way the superbold inkline is shaped makes her hand look funky, something to look out for.
2.) her right hand: i suggest that if you ever have another body/part overlapping something with elaborate detail, you should use a medium weight line to bold around it, therefore making it easier to pick out among the details. you're already doing that with the superbold lines around her, just do a weaker bold under her arm/hand area.
3.) her skirt. the folds are planed well, for their simplicity, but the inking is snarled. next time, use fewer strokes to make the inner folds, the lower left section is the worst, sadly.
again, along the left side, instead of using a uniform bold along, i suggest a tappered line, where the thinest part is the top, and the thickest is the lower...
those are my suggestions. keep at it, So Says I.
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