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Shabriri-Lin — Ulquiorra Returns Comic p20 Innocent's blood

Published: 2009-11-29 20:57:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 5819; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Description Page 20 of my bleach doujinshi about what happened after Ichigo blew his cero over Ulquiorra T_T
It's read from left to right..

Buf.. I can't believe I reached page 20 already!!
I want to say thanks to everybody !! I wouldn't have been able to draw so many pages without everybody's suporting!

If you have read the previous page, you saw the girl was looking at something inside the blood stain at her feet.
Now you can check whether you had guessed correctly what that thing was. ^_^

My neighbour told me he had seen Aizen's face there.. wow, what an imagination he has!

Anyway, I don't know if you have seen the spanish playing cards. Well, there are 4 suits and one of them are "Espadas" (Swords) So the cards in the blood puddles symbolize the Espada, that's why the girl is so sad..


I hope you enjoy this page and, leave me your comments, please


Ah, the translation:

Ichigo: Is she the same girl?
Ichigo: Hey! Where are we? Why have you taken me here?

Ichigo: My chest hurts so much. It's overwhelming , as if my heart were being pierced by a dagger. But why? These are only pieces of paper...

Ichigo: Is she crying? ...I got it.. The pain piercing my chest is not mine.. it's hers!

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Comments: 41

Suchienku-GA [2009-12-14 20:56:17 +0000 UTC]

:wohoo: your story kicks ass!
your storyline is so thloughtful, I love the ideas with the cards, symbolizing the espadas, that´s one hell of a great idea. I wish I could have an idea like this for the fanfic I´writing on recently...

also the pain exchange is wonderfully done, another great idea!


Keep it up this way, I enjoy reading this so much!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to Suchienku-GA [2009-12-15 13:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!

The idea appeared in my mind because Ulquiorra's bad spanish "cuatro espada" is similar to the spanish name of that card. the correct spanish for "4th Espada" is "cuarta espada"

I loved your previous fanfic!It was full of wonderful ideas and thrilling scenes! So I'm sure the one you are writing now is gonna be awesome!!

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Suchienku-GA In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-12-17 20:28:54 +0000 UTC]

haha, poor Ulqui had a bad Spanish teacher But nevertheless, the card idea is awesome!

yeah, I´m proud of "Deaths", too.
and this new fanfic is okay so far, I´ve six pages written and I think I need like twenty more to finish it. but I´m at a dead-end momentarily, I don´t know how to continue the story, something like a good "brigde"is missing. that´s why it´s laid down for several weeks now ahhh, I need an idea so badly!
thanks!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to Suchienku-GA [2009-12-23 19:34:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you'll find a good idea soon! Now is vacation time and you probably will have more time to think about it! *^_^*

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Kirtash80 [2009-11-30 21:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow, te está quedando impresionante esta historia, me la he leido enterita!Esta última página te ha quedado muy bien dibujada. Bueno, todas las anteriores también!A ver cuando tenga un poquito más de tiempo y te comento un poco todas Me han encantado los paneles de la última línea!Tu estilo de dibujo es precioso, me gusta mucho como captas las expresiones y las posiciones están de muerte!Las sombras y distintos tonos que haces, como por ejemplo el pelo, te están quedando preciosos!Espero que continúes con esta historia!Felicidades por este trabajo impresionante!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to Kirtash80 [2009-12-07 12:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Muchísimas gracias!!!
Me has hecho muy feliz con este comentario!!

Aun me queda mucho por mejorar, pero estoy tan contenta que hayas leido toda la historia y te haya gustado!!

A veces tengo dudas acerca de si la secuencia de viñetas esta bien o si se esta entendiendo la historia o si es lo suficientemente dinamica para que no aburra a los lectores Por eso me gusta mucho que la gente me diga su opinion!! ^_^

Gracias de nuevo!! Y espero con ilusion tus comentarios!!

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Vanescence [2009-11-30 17:23:55 +0000 UTC]

great ^^

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to Vanescence [2009-12-07 11:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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Yakai [2009-11-30 16:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Kiaa, la ame >.< que buena pagina!!

Perdon, amix si no conteste antes ando con finales y estoy re agotada

-.-U

besos!

atte.Yakai :3

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to Yakai [2009-12-07 11:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Gracias!!
Que tal los finales? ^^UU
Estas en la universidad o en el instituto? hm .. liceo creo que le llaman allá no? ^_^

Yo estoy en la uni.. pero este semestre no asistí. Si Dios quiere reiniciare las clases el proximo semestre. -.-U

besos!!

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Yakai In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-12-07 18:50:15 +0000 UTC]

No estoy aun en el instituto jeje por suerte aprobe todo y estos de vacaciones jeje. Ademas, que me gustaria hablar amix contigo por msm. Tienes O.o?

el mio es lu_kiara@hotmail.com

Dentro de un año entrare a la universidad XD

besos!!

atte.Yakai

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to Yakai [2009-12-07 20:45:30 +0000 UTC]

que suerte que aprobaste!!

no me suelo conectar muy amenudo pero tengo msn

te agrego ahora!

mi msn te lo mando mejor por nota por si me sale un acosador jojojo!

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sasoridelaarenaroja [2009-11-30 15:13:54 +0000 UTC]

me encanta la idea de lo de las cartas, es genial ^^ me gusta mucho esta pagina ^^ sigue asi!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to sasoridelaarenaroja [2009-12-07 12:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias!! Me alegro que te guste la idea! Estaba preocupada por si no se iba a entender lo de las cartas. ^_^UU

Me esforzaré en las siguientes paginas >_
besos!

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sasoridelaarenaroja In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-12-07 15:05:54 +0000 UTC]

se entendio bien ^.^
esfuerzate!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to sasoridelaarenaroja [2009-12-07 19:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias!!

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sasoridelaarenaroja In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-12-08 15:20:03 +0000 UTC]

de nada! ^-^

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xXxIhime-chanxXx [2009-11-30 02:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, more plot! I can't wait for the next page!

I like how you used the cards representing the defeated Espada...it's a really good idea!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to xXxIhime-chanxXx [2009-12-07 12:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Thank you so much!!
I was worried whether people would understand the cards symbolism or not.

I'm so happy you like the idea *^_^*

I'll try to upload more pages soon! Hopefully today (^_~)

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xXxIhime-chanxXx In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-12-16 19:54:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome
X3 I was actually happy I picked that out of the picture!

>w<
Yay!

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ayinvui [2009-11-30 00:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Ichi's eye on the upper right panel is very nice!!

The story's quite complicated but I can understand it... ^^

Very well done!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to ayinvui [2009-11-30 00:43:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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ayinvui In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-11-30 01:21:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! ^^

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LilDeidaraGirl [2009-11-29 23:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow really good.
So magic cards to the extreme.
Poor girl...

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to LilDeidaraGirl [2009-11-29 23:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!
It seems that some people don't know the Spanish playing cards
So I just added this explanation to the page comment's ^_^

"I don't know if you have seen the spanish playing cards. Well, there are 4 suits and one of them are "Espadas" (Swords) So the cards in the blood puddles symbolize the Espada, that's why the girl is so sad.. "

Thank you again for your comment!

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LilDeidaraGirl In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-11-29 23:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Hehe I get it.
I know what swords are in spainish because I wanted to figure out stuff that the "Espada" say. XD

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to LilDeidaraGirl [2009-11-30 00:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Hehe!! I see! *^_^*

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LilDeidaraGirl In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-11-30 01:05:54 +0000 UTC]

^^

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sugarsnapsxx [2009-11-29 22:41:07 +0000 UTC]

aww so sad. i love the way you've shaded her hair - the last two panels are brilliant!!

i cant wait for the next page!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to sugarsnapsxx [2009-11-29 22:58:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!
It means so much to me!!

I'll try my best for the next page!

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sugarsnapsxx In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-11-29 23:24:25 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome and yayyy

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KR07 [2009-11-29 21:09:26 +0000 UTC]

wow.. the girl's crying face is awesome!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to KR07 [2009-11-29 21:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!! I'm happy you like it!

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KR07 In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-12-02 19:16:03 +0000 UTC]

^^

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superaura [2009-11-29 21:06:11 +0000 UTC]

impresionante página O_O la cara de tu OC (como se llama?) es quiza lo más bonito de esta página. BRAVO!

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to superaura [2009-11-29 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Muchísimas gracias!!

Bueno el nombre de ella no se ha revelado aun. Yo lo decidi desde la primera vez que lo dibuje.. pero voy a esperar un poco mas a revelarlo jeje!

Lo que no se es si la gente de fuera conoce lo suficiente la baraja española como para darse cuenta de que las cartas representan a los Espada

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superaura In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-11-29 22:19:29 +0000 UTC]

de nada ^^

vaaale, espero, es k se me hace raro llamarla "chica" todo el rato XD

creo k deberías explicarlo, por si las moscas...

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to superaura [2009-11-29 23:50:22 +0000 UTC]

jeje! tienes razón pero es que me base en un personaje que crei que iba a existir en bleach pero como ya no soy capaz de prever por donde va a salir el autor pues no me atrevo a darle nombre hasta saber que carainas pasa con Ulquiorra.. y como la cosa demora..

Ya puse un nota explicatoria de lo de las cartas ^_^
Espero que la gente la lea

ahrgh se me ha hecho tardísimo.. y yo que quería pasarme un rato por tu foro.. Es que ya solo me conecto los fines de semana y tengo tanto por hacer..

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superaura In reply to Shabriri-Lin [2009-11-30 00:05:54 +0000 UTC]

bueno, solo nos queda tener paciencia

bueno, siempre puedes estar unos minuticos y luego irte a dormir ^^

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lavender-kush [2009-11-29 21:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very effective. This cards have daggers on them I see, very good. Especially on the girl's expression in the 14th panel. I love it

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Shabriri-Lin In reply to lavender-kush [2009-11-29 22:00:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!! I'm happy you like it!
Well the cards have not exactly daggers on them
I don't know if you have seen the spanish playing cards. Well, there are 4 suits and one of them are "Espadas" (Swords) So the cards in the blood puddles symbolize the Espada, that's why the girl is so sad..

(in fact the one at her feet is "cuatro de Espadas" T_T)

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