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Published: 2005-05-26 21:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I'm so weak
From my subconscious beating me
My heart beat has accelerated
As my hands tremble
My body feels heavy
And I fall to the ground
I am too strong to cry
Yet too weak to stand

Now my mind follows my heart
And thoughts are distorted
I see blood through my mind
The only thing I can focus on
Yet it is not my own
But the blood of my victims
Who I cold heartedly murdered

I guess I can safely assume
That now all those emotions
Are finally flooding back
To consume me

But to assume
Is to make an ass out of you and me
And that is why I am contained in this cell
Why I am bound to this straight jacket
And why you were my "victim"
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Comments: 14

Thumper-X [2005-05-27 19:56:23 +0000 UTC]

Damn good...Shocked...

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shadowedfire In reply to Thumper-X [2005-05-28 04:02:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Thumper-X In reply to shadowedfire [2005-05-28 04:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!!! -Has no clue how to work the smilie things-

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shadowedfire In reply to Thumper-X [2005-05-28 14:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh , you mean like right? Just click on the emoticon legend at the bottom and it shows ya.

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Thumper-X In reply to shadowedfire [2005-05-28 19:23:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah but I'm lazy and yeah...:-D

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shadowedfire In reply to Thumper-X [2005-05-28 20:40:29 +0000 UTC]

lol, aren't we all?

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Satire-Frost [2005-05-27 17:22:42 +0000 UTC]

wow i like it definately one that gets you thinking

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shadowedfire In reply to Satire-Frost [2005-05-27 18:25:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Andrea-Raine [2005-05-27 17:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Yep that's the poems i'm used to you writting lol but very well written i like it alot the end brings it all together i like that

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shadowedfire In reply to Andrea-Raine [2005-05-27 18:27:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I love the ending and wanted to do something different yet still in my norm.

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Andrea-Raine In reply to shadowedfire [2005-05-27 18:37:05 +0000 UTC]

lol well you did

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shadowedfire In reply to Andrea-Raine [2005-05-28 04:02:50 +0000 UTC]

yup yup

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JL-Miller [2005-05-27 01:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Interesting image...

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shadowedfire In reply to JL-Miller [2005-05-27 02:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Yup, thanks for the !!

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