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Published: 2005-05-23 02:34:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description Give in to sight
Give in to noise
Let it consume you
Until silence is all that remains
Drain all from the mind
Leave an empty black space
Let this blackness cover all
And now vision a red sphere
Among the dim backdrop
One may easily call this sphere an apple
With the red skin full of life
As you run your flesh over it
You remember the touch
Now the apple is in both hands
It's surface is warm to the touch
A pleasing gesture
You bring the apple closer to your face
For a breif moment your lips caress the skin
Before your teeth sink in
And the taste you cannot remember
Yet another bite is taken
Still no taste is found
Then all sight comes back
The real world welcomes you back
So falls a tear from your failure
But maybe next time
When one's heart races once more
Maybe next time you'll remember it all
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Comments: 8

Satire-Frost [2005-05-23 15:00:57 +0000 UTC]

And yet maybe there was nothing to remember....

(dodo dod do) <--suposed to be like the weird music yeah going to go diein a corner from the cheeseyness now

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shadowedfire In reply to Satire-Frost [2005-05-23 15:15:56 +0000 UTC]

?*is confused about the rember*

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Andrea-Raine [2005-05-23 13:54:50 +0000 UTC]

lol i like it very much a very different style for you but it's good. We did that exercise in Drama lol but yes very good

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shadowedfire In reply to Andrea-Raine [2005-05-23 14:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I like it lots as well. We did the apple in Drama?

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Andrea-Raine In reply to shadowedfire [2005-05-23 14:05:21 +0000 UTC]

yeah where you visualize the apple and stuff

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shadowedfire In reply to Andrea-Raine [2005-05-23 14:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I don't know. I thought she told us what to see. Well, whatever.

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Andrea-Raine In reply to shadowedfire [2005-05-23 14:11:18 +0000 UTC]

yeah that too but we did the apple as well

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shadowedfire In reply to Andrea-Raine [2005-05-23 14:46:08 +0000 UTC]

ok

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