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Published: 2003-11-10 01:06:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description I stab a dagger through my already broken heart
The puddle turns into a sea
That drowns the world
So they are now dead with me
So that I am not alone
But I know I will always be
So there is no way of me being free
Why have I been given so much torment all my life
Never lucky a break given to me
No one showing me how to live
I walked down the wrong path every time
Couldn't do anything right in my father's eyes
I tried to follow the crowd
Be "cool' like the rest
But always alone
Now I question why I had a life
How could someone let this be done
Do they have no heart
I guess I'll never find out
I guess there is....no answer for my being
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Comments: 9

skippingstones [2003-11-13 20:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Your work is so emotional. Very nicely written!

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shadowedfire In reply to skippingstones [2003-11-13 22:48:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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kloy [2003-11-13 01:35:35 +0000 UTC]

yes a very sad poem were did you get the insperation for this one.

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shadowedfire In reply to kloy [2003-11-13 01:39:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks, um, i was depressed really and i didn't have a very good day

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AloneInTheLight [2003-11-13 01:32:53 +0000 UTC]

Hmm emotional. Very. I know how you feel.

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Buffsterkor [2003-11-12 01:24:59 +0000 UTC]

very honest and nice flow..cool

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shadowedfire In reply to Buffsterkor [2003-11-13 01:25:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks a bunch

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kittybro [2003-11-11 19:58:09 +0000 UTC]

Your so alone...like so many people. I think you have depression or can you get it at your age?? Any way, your poem are all really touching with a lil or a lot of suicidal stuff in it.. I heart your work

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DissolvingAu [2003-11-10 01:25:50 +0000 UTC]

So sad, A sense of belonging with people can never be fully achieved, sad really

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