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NotenSMSK [2012-09-29 20:03:40 +0000 UTC]
Well I am happy to see that you have someone that can tell you to submit poetry and all at times... I think the work was well written and there was quite some depth in it . at places it seemed to lose the feel as in it couldn't grab the reader but that were rare occasions and other than the little feeling that I got there was little wrong to it.
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NotenSMSK In reply to ShadowOfBrokenWings [2012-10-01 03:26:04 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome and if you want to, I can give a much deeper critique.
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