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ShadowOfBrokenWings β€” To Be Free Once More by-nc-nd
Published: 2012-08-29 21:30:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 249; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description I'm so used to the darkness, the consuming emptiness was all I've known
But to many this emptiness was never shown
Some say they could see it in my eyes, in the smile that never was
A smile that was always there but hollow from within

To be broken is all I've ever felt
Losing what I held so tight, this damaging sorrow was dealt
Left forever in a blizzard, with no coat, no sun
My frost bite and scars run so ever deep

The darkness is all I've ever written about
Happiness is an expression i've been unable to express, cause I've had my doubts
Doubts that it would last, why write about something I've barely known
Why write about something I've barely shown

But I can feel it underneath my skin
It's barely breathing, but it's alive, the pulses spin
It hasn't been long since She pulled me from this deep dark sleep
It hasn't been long since I've felt the sun coursing through my veins

But I feel my pulse flowing, I feel my heart beat going
I can feel this radiant light eagerly flowing
All I've known is this darkness in my writingΒ 
But I can feel this light, I can see myself fighting



To be free once more
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Comments: 8

NotenSMSK [2012-09-29 20:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Well I am happy to see that you have someone that can tell you to submit poetry and all at times... I think the work was well written and there was quite some depth in it . at places it seemed to lose the feel as in it couldn't grab the reader but that were rare occasions and other than the little feeling that I got there was little wrong to it.

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to NotenSMSK [2012-09-30 23:34:29 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks but yes i do agree with your point there, i dont usually write some up lifting poetry, its something i need to work on so give me sometime if you will

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NotenSMSK In reply to ShadowOfBrokenWings [2012-10-01 03:26:04 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome and if you want to, I can give a much deeper critique.

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to NotenSMSK [2012-10-01 21:37:47 +0000 UTC]

its totally up to you but thanks!

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GrimTheGirl [2012-08-29 22:02:52 +0000 UTC]

)> )> I'd like to give you another one x3

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to GrimTheGirl [2012-08-29 22:04:20 +0000 UTC]

another one of what? :3

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GrimTheGirl In reply to ShadowOfBrokenWings [2012-08-29 22:12:29 +0000 UTC]

It's...its a heart Cx
)> )> <( <(
LOLOLOLOLOLOL XD

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to GrimTheGirl [2012-08-29 22:15:15 +0000 UTC]

^^ hehe
<) <)

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