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Published: 2014-01-01 03:04:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 767; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Something quick I did for New Years.
Happy New years! XD
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I did her all in blue as if she was not only upgraded by the Allspark, but fused with it.
Just some fun before the Ball drops.
What do you think? Should I try it with SG Sari?
EDIT:: Redraw:
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The colour scheme works well, giving it a nicely dramatic feel. The shading is also effective, especially on the neck - it's a bit messy on the chin and the hair, perhaps spend a bit more time tidying it up for a truly polished feel.
Anatomically, it's a little skewed - the eyes are slightly too wide (though it does actually kind-of work), the nose is a little too snub and the tilt of the lips is off (like the eyes, it sort-of works giving the side-smile you'd intended).
Each part of the face looks like it'd work perfectly at a different angle of perspective (the nose seen from a viewer below looking up; the lips on a slightly tilted angle) - but at the straight-on viewer's eye-level angle, they look skewed and make it feel 'slightly off'; which is a shame, because it's a cute image and the expressiveness of her eyes and mouth are beautiful.
Overall, it's a nice piece. Try using a reference for the parts in future to try and keep it grounded in reality so that the cuteness and expressiveness can really shine through.
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Why thank you for taking the time to critique!
And you're right on a lot of points. Originally, this was just a quicky before the new year, but already so much praise! So I shall take your advice and find a good reference pic an polish it up some.
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(I'm debating whether or not I should start all over and take my time, or just polish this one up)... Nah, I'll start all over! XD
Thanks again for the advice!
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Love the colors,.
the lightening is splendiod,
The mouth is a little bit different swooped up to the side,
but that just could be me,
You've done well drawing Sari, the neck and hair and those eyes,
those eyes are splendid. Sari must be smiling in this image cute as she could ever be in the viewwers eyes. Her chin and cheeks are perfect, just way too good to be true.
The hair has a really good detail.
The shade is fantastic, so utterly and amazingly fanTAStic! No I mean it. Nine more words. This is good. You are--GEROMINO! :3
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very pretty. I'd like to see an SG Sari version if you feel like making one.
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You are welcome .
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Awesome drawing,Sis. =^_^= Like the neon blue.
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Why thank you dork! XD
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lol =^_^= Happy new year.
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