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Takeshi is primary first main protagonist in Retribution. He was born in June 6th and year unknown. He is seventeen year old, his height is 5’8. His appearance is he wears a school blue uniform with long sleeves, combat gloves, dark blue pants, and red sneakers. He has a scarred black left eye but in the middle of his left eye has Antichrist symbol; a glowing red upside down cross is very visible to see. He has red hair and his right eye is brown. Takeshi’s story, he is the son of Lucifer and his mother is Bara. She was an agent from the Red Skulls, Lucifer once escaped from hell. Bara and her partner Michael an archangel, try to send Lucifer back to hell. Bara was capture by Lucifer to be raped, so she could give birth to his child. Michael sacrifice himself to seal Lucifer back to hell, thus Michael was recarnaited into Takeshi unborn body in Bara’s womb. Nine months later, Bara dies giving birth to Takeshi and named him after her death. He was taken by the Red Skulls organization that protects the world from evil supernatural forces. They believe that Takeshi will someday defeat his father; Takeshi was trained by master swordsmen named Osamu. Four years he trains to be strong swordsmen to protect the world from his father. Now he was seventeen years old, Takeshi was send to Japan to protect a young a girl named Yua. Takeshi became a personal bodyguard to Yua, he became her bodyguard after he saved her from a group demons. Takeshi swore to protect her no matter what; he will die for her. Personality is he very protective, loyal to his friends, and especially to Yua. Takeshi always watches over Yua at anytime, anyplace. He becomes serious when he sees Yua is in trouble or when a demon attacks. He has personal grudge against his father who he wish kill him someday. He believes he is only one that can defeat his father. His weapon and abilities is a Michael Sword. A sword that has purifies and destroys the evil. His cursed eyed that gives his enemies, an illusion to see the sins they have committed. He also has super strength that gives powerful punches.



Yua Kaname is second primary main protagonist and love interest of Takeshi in Retribution. She is sixteen years old and was born in June 13th. Her height is 5’5. Her appearance is she wears a formal school bright yellow cotton vest, light red skirt. She has big breasts and smooth soft skin. She has a yellowish light brown hair and pink eyes. She has a strange upside down cross birthmark on her whole back. Yua’s story, she lives at home alone. Her father is very busy man who travels the world, rarely he visit his kids. Her mother died in she was young age. Now Yua goes to Seto Kishimoto High School Academy, she is the most beautiful girl in school. She sometimes is harassed by boys in school but her friend Aki protects her from them. Aki is Yua’ childhood friend. Soon Yua started having nightmares about the end of the world where she sees herself being taken by a tall man who has an evil grin on his face. Another figure appeared holding a sword screaming her name but her nightmare ends there. Sooner she meets Takeshi who protected her from group low rank demons. She has learned she is the key to open the gates of hell and gain supernatural abilities too. Her personality is polite and soft spoken. She is also helpful and care deeply of her friends’ safety. As the story progress soon Yua develops feelings for Takeshi. Weapons and abilities, she has no weapon. But she has the abilities to see lost spirits, and throw spiritual energy blasts. She also has premonitions of people deaths.


Domaru Rosen is one of the main characters from Retribution. He's one of the agents from the Red Skulls and first one who assist Takashi. Born in October 21st and he is fifteen years old. He is a Werewolf, he only can transform into his wolf form when someone is in trouble, he mostly seen in his human form. He hates being a werewolf because he can’t control his wolf form too long or it will consume him with violent dark rage. In his appearance he wears saggy sweat black pants, no shoes, and a light-dark green stripe sweater with no t-shirt on from under; he show off his muscles. His hair is messy spikey dark brown and his eyes are green. His height is 5’7. His personality is wild, self centered, and naive. He always has a big mouth he says, “I’m the hero and the best.” He tries proving to everyone he is strong and brave. He also has short attention span that he gets bored so easily he finds way to have fun. He is very protective to his close friends. He is soft spot for Yua and motivates her to confess her feelings to Takeshi. He has second personality when he turns into his wolf form. His wolf form is very violent and easily gets angry but sometimes he tries to control it. He also has strong deep hatred and romantic feelings with a cat girl named Neko but don’t show it because he’s sometimes is naïve to notice Neko’s love for him. He also has close friendly bond with another girl named Tomoyo a vampire who is a day walker.His story began when he was young; he and older brother Ushiro were attacked by werewolves. His parents were scientist who research alchemy, they hope to cure their sons’ curse using the power of alchemy. One day Ushiro couldn’t control his wolf form as the result he killed his parents and almost killing his brother but left him for dead. Women named Sandoval from the Red Skulls took Domaru by her care and raise him as his own son; also trains him to fight. In the age of fifteen he was sent to Japan to assist Takashi to face stronger enemies. Later Domaru faces his older brother and crew. He swears to stop Ushiro who plans to live forever using the power of alchemy by sacrificing lives. Abilities and weapons, he uses a blue wooden fighting stick. His abilities transform into a werewolf, wolf slash, super speed, super strength, super scent, he has healing factor heals quickly in battle even he can regenerate his lose body parts, Capoeira (a Brazilian martial arts.)


Aki, He is seventeen years old and childhood friend of Yua. He was born on May 15th. His height is 5’8. His appearance has blonde short hair and brown eyes. He mostly wears his school outfit wearing a white T-shirt, rolled up sleeves, and brown pants. His Personality, Aki usually maintains a stern, serious and distanced personality, but often loses his temper in a goofy and exaggerated comical style. He can also be extremely intimidating, easily frightening weaker opponents with just his glare. Aki has a kind heart, shown as he was willing to risk his own life for the sake of his life to Yua like his own sister. He even has a crush on older girl named Dawn He has a strong bond with his homeroom and history teacher Seiya Wilton. Aki is very curious to find his birth parents someday. Aki’s story, he was orphan since the day he was born. When he was sixteen year old, the orphanage believes that Aki can live by himself in Japan. In present day he goes to school with Yua and cause fights at school. Soon he meets Takashi let him stay and protect Yua. Aki agrees to help Takashi and stop the evil forces. Soon Aki gain abilities to control and create fire in midair. He is told by the Red Skulls that his mother is alive somewhere, and father who is fire demon that proves Aki is a half demon. He hopes to meet both of his parents someday. His ability is he can control and create fire.



Raiden Garcia is an immortal who is one of the agents from the Red Skulls. He is eighteen years old; he was born in December 2nd. His height is 5’8. His appearance is black hair and blue eyes and soft skin. He wears a black school uniform (Open up black shirt to show off his muscles.) His personality is super-intelligent and arrogant on the inside; Raiden puts on a more affable personality amongst his friends. He also very protective to his twin sister Tomoyo, he sometimes he makes remarks that he’s hot or sexy. He also he flirts with women, and respects them by being gentlemen. Even he acts serious when he is in a fight or doing his missions. He later falls in love with a girl named Gami who turns out be Death. Raiden’s story began, when him and his sister were orphans who attacked by vampire in alley of Tokyo at night. The vampire did blood transfusion causing Raiden to be immortal slave but not turning into a vampire. Soon they were rescued by man from Spain named Carlos Garcia. He was agent from the Red Skulls. Carlos raised them and trains them to be strong against evil. Later Carlos was killed from a mission by vampires. Raiden was with him at the time, Carlos who had lightning abilities and gave his power to Raiden; use for good. Today Raiden and his sister go to Japan to protect Yua. Abilities and weapons, he has the abilities super speed, can jump 100 feet, and claw slash; he also has lightning abilities that he gain from Carlos. His weapons are two knuckle blades that throws thunder bolts, and can cut threw steel.


Tomoyo Garcia is a Vampire who agent from the Red Skulls, she also Raiden’s twin sister. She is eighteen years old; she was born December 2nd. Her height is 5’7. Her appearance, she has dark violet short hair and blue eyes. She wears a black tank top and girly levy shorts; her breast size is B-cups. Her personality is she has tough attitude, short temper, she shows off that she is strong. She sometimes gets jealous when other men ignore her because of her small breasts. She also has hate/love relationship with Domaru; she has a secret crush on Domaru. She hates Neko who for being with Domaru around. Later she meets Shengo a fox demon that take liking to her. She also hates her brother sometimes when he acts dramatic over protective around her. Mostly she thinks of her for being independent and shows that she is. Her story is she and her brother Raiden were orphans when they were young. Later they get attacked by vampire in alley of Tokyo at night. Instead of her brother being immortal like the blood transfusion; she was bitten by the vampire, thus she was turn into a vampire. Somehow her blood is special made her into a daywalker that she can walk at daytime, uses blood capsules to keep her to not kill anyone. Weapon and abilities, her weapon is spiked metal club uses it against demons, monsters, Raiden, Domaru, and Shengo; when three annoy her and gets her mad. Her ability is super strength, super speed, and super sight.


Neko the cat girl, Her age is unknown but she looks like she is in around seventeen or sixteen and is height 5’5. Her appearance she has cat ears above her head, she has long pink hair with bangs. Her eyes are yellow, she also a cat tail behind her butt. She wears a tight, blue sleeveless turtleneck shirt that shows off her belly, and levy girly shorts and red boots. She has has yellow bell around her turtleneck. She has red headband that is on her forehead. Her body is form with huge breasts and firm butt too. Her personality is she has happy go girl attitude, she sometimes lazy, she is also clingy when Domaru is around. She is madly in love with Domaru, she always want to stay by his side. She hopes that Domaru will marry her, but sad part Domaru is too naive to notice it. She also constantly plays around him saying “Master.” Domaru gets mad at Neko who acting clingy around him. Her story is she was once a cat but was taken by businessmen turning her into human and makes her as a sex slave. Domaru came to stop the businessmen using animals to turn them into humanoid sex slaves. He rescued Neko, after that event she never left his side. Abilities, she can use seductive scent making the men around fall for her, she also can bring back someone back to life by a kiss on the lips; the result of that she must give away her nine lives. She has combat attacks using kickboxing moves to defend her from perverts.



Hanyu who is a small adorable shadow demon who love cookies that he is obsesses of them. His appearance is a full body black skin with yellow eyes, wings, demonic tail. His height is small, his size of stuffed teddy bear. His ears are between both sides on his head, spiked straight back. Personality, he is kind and squealing cute voice, he loves causing mischief or pranks. He loves cookies, and drinking milk. His story began, where he was injured and Yua finds him, took him as a pet. His abilities, he can shape shift into random humans. He can also morph in the shadows at corners, walls, and dark places. He also has second form, a much tall form; stretch out arms and legs. He also has claws to attack an enemy, but the only time when he is in second form. Only someone he cares about like Yua or the others are in big trouble.


Dawn Casswell, who is Takeshi’s childhood friend and the granddaughter of Takeshi’s swordsmen master Osamu. She is nineteen years old; she was born on June 2nd and year unknown. Her height is 5’8. Her appearance, she wears a pink jacket and a lighter pink shirt; she also wears brown shorts and carries a huge on her back. She has green eyes and blonde hair; a ponytail. Her personality is tough and very mature, she sometimes argues with Takeshi when they were young. She even had a crush on him, but lost interest when they got older. She has motion sickness, she always gets sick she ever in transportation. Later on, she does have secret crush on Aki. Her story begins, Dawn’s parents were Red Skulls agents her father was American named Frank Casswell and her mother who is Japanese named Sana Hikari; the daughter of Osamu the master swordsmen. They met and fell in love, got married; had baby girl named Dawn. Sadly Dawn’s parents were killed by demons during a mission. Osamu took Dawn and raised her. Dawn was trained to be demon slayer by Osamu. During her youth years, she was train with Takeshi by her side soon became friends. She even had a crush Takeshi because of the time spending with him, soon she lost interest with him when he left and got older. Later she and Osamu came to help Takeshi to protect Yua and the world. Soon she meets Aki, starts having a strong bond of friendship. Sooner it becomes even more. When Aki is feeling sad, Dawn always tries to cheer him up; one time she actually kisses him when seiya died by Fuyaki the fire demon. Abilities and weapons, she has huge sword that was given by her grandfather. She is very skilled with her swordsmanship and super strength whenever she is mad.


Gami, who is Raiden’s love interest; a girl who suffers amnesia, and has no record of her past. She is sixteen years old; her height is 5’6. Date of birth unknown. Her appearance is she wears very dark red sweater, and long black skirt. She has long white hair and red eyes; very attractive looking. Personality, she is quiet, polite, very shy, and in love with Raiden. Her story, it began she was found by Raiden at a river nearby a town. Raiden ask her name all she remembers is Gami. So Raiden took her as his own care, and took Gami to school as a school girl like Yua. Sooner Raiden fell in love with her and Gami loved Raiden they became a couple. When Takeshi and the others defeated all the seven demons, soon the four horsemen are revealed that Gami herself is one of the horsemen. She is death for other words; she is a shinigami the only one. The way how she got her amnesia is god itself made her in amnesia only she remembers she does her job as grim reaper. Lucifer wanted her and so he broke a seal inside was given by god. Doing that she remembers, she joins Lucifer to cause the destruction to the world. Raiden heard the news about Gami, Raiden goes to get Gami back, as he confronts her; telling his love for her. Thus she couldn’t hurt him that she loves him. Gami rejoins with Raiden and the others to stop Lucifer. Abilities and weapons, she can use her scythe. Have the ability called the touch of death, and touch of life. She also has super strength and the ability to fly.



Shengo is one of the former seven demons and Domaru’s rival. Shengo age and birth is unknown, his height is 6’0. His personality is ruthless, wild, loudmouth, and also has an anger problem. He also loves to fight after his very inpatient and always want to have fun with fists. After he joins the red skulls, he has soft spot for Tomoyo when he spends with her. His appearance that he is fox demon who has orange hair, fox ears and fox tail. He has human-like face to make look human except for the ears and tail. He wears a dark purple long trench coat, black and white stripe shirt; dark blue pants. He carries a huge black sword on his back. His story began, when he was chosen by the seven demons as the second powerful demon of the group. After everyone defeated the other four demons, Domaru faces Shengo in fight who he kidnap Neko. Shengo kills Domaru with his sword, but Domaru was brought back by Neko’s nine lives kiss. Domaru with will of fire of to never give up, he defeated Shengo and left him to live. Soon after killing last seventh Shengo joins the Red skulls to defeat Lucifer. He also attended high school hoping to fight his rival Domaru. Shengo soon has a closer friendly relationship with Tomoyo, who sometimes beats him when he acts wild; but Shengo cares about her. Weapons and abilities; he has huge black sword, skills with swordsmanship. His ability he can transform into giant fox monstrous demon whenever he is in grave danger. He also can throw energy blasts and uses elemental powers like fire, wind, earth, water.
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Comments: 6

SneakehFox [2012-06-22 04:50:36 +0000 UTC]

VERY creative characters ^^

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ShadowSythe13 In reply to SneakehFox [2012-06-22 07:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SneakehFox In reply to ShadowSythe13 [2012-06-22 18:51:57 +0000 UTC]

My favorites are the werewolf and the fox demon. ^^

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ShadowSythe13 In reply to SneakehFox [2012-06-22 20:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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DeadCobra [2011-05-23 18:32:00 +0000 UTC]

Great

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ShadowSythe13 In reply to DeadCobra [2011-05-23 22:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you what you really think of each characters?

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