Comments: 188
Lynnae-Madison [2013-03-07 08:52:10 +0000 UTC]
It's sad I love it
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lovemypunkin7 [2012-10-18 04:44:27 +0000 UTC]
Nice way to express your love to someone.
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xXanimetenshiXx [2011-08-22 03:26:34 +0000 UTC]
This poem is more real for me than anyone would know. I love this. It sings to me.
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RandomDrawerPerson [2011-07-28 11:06:31 +0000 UTC]
I have a friend and we have been friends since we were little kids. He is like extended family. Thing is after all we've been through how do I tell him how I really feel about him? What if it ruins our bond? What if he feels the same? Help?
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shae2003 In reply to RandomDrawerPerson [2011-07-28 22:05:51 +0000 UTC]
Not sure how much help I can be. All I can say is you need to be honest with yourself and with him. If you have to, write about how you're feeling. Maybe this will help you sort things out. Good luck and I hope everything works out with you and your friend!
-Shae
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RandomDrawerPerson In reply to shae2003 [2011-07-28 23:07:15 +0000 UTC]
I know someone at school called shae. He's an annoying twat. But your nice and thank you. I'm gonna see him over the summer hols. I've tried to tell him before. But oh well. Wish me bravery.
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JohnChristJohn [2011-06-01 10:59:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow! If this were said of me... my heart would burst!
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gothicferret14 [2011-03-06 01:33:20 +0000 UTC]
I was on the brink of tears when I read this! This is beautiful, great job!
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ilovedeathnote24 [2010-12-18 22:01:58 +0000 UTC]
this is sooooooooooooooo freakin intense i cryed and i hardly ever cry jk i cry ALOT
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beuk-d [2010-11-18 15:23:26 +0000 UTC]
beautifull!!!
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nightblade09665 [2010-11-16 23:29:13 +0000 UTC]
hey thats real deep and very sweet
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snowraven0 [2010-11-05 02:20:05 +0000 UTC]
The only thing I want is to be in love with you
to watch each day pass by like seconds
on a clock that never runs
my absolute favorite part..
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DariaIoana [2010-10-31 20:29:44 +0000 UTC]
i wish i love this way
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MasterJimmy92 [2010-10-26 05:57:00 +0000 UTC]
omg love it!!!
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Amethystte [2010-09-15 08:00:12 +0000 UTC]
I could watch him just talk forever.
I'd give up everything just to have him.
I'll do anything for him to return my feelings.
He inspired me to be an artist again.
I don't deserve to even know someone as amazing as him.
That last hug he gave me before I had to leave, I'll treasure that forever.
When I got lost and had to get back to my grandpa, he showed me how to get there, and I ran, because he told me I should hurry, that my family was probably worried about me.
He says he's not as amazing as I say he is. That's not true. He's ten times more. He's perfect in every way.
I love him...
I will always love him...
And yet... he only sees me as a little girl with a crush.
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AnaCatharina [2010-09-14 23:22:29 +0000 UTC]
luuuvvveeddd it !!!! its beautiful and i can relate to this poem, its just how i feel about this boy, who doesn't even know i exist probably :/
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hugo4193 [2010-08-06 23:44:16 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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hugo4193 In reply to shae2003 [2010-08-09 00:29:00 +0000 UTC]
no thanks for your pic
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Midway6 [2010-07-28 22:35:25 +0000 UTC]
wow i really like it
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shae2003 In reply to Midway6 [2010-08-08 17:18:25 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad!
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Erzeal [2010-06-21 23:10:29 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful...I love this...
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Seriah-Zauch [2010-06-04 11:37:00 +0000 UTC]
very nice poem......
too bad i'm the school crazy or something stupid like that....
rumors say i had sex with someone just for 3 months of math homework.... i love math though....
...........i've never even had a first kiss......
screw life...
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Seriah-Zauch In reply to shae2003 [2010-06-05 04:43:38 +0000 UTC]
i hate drama.... i'm not even emotional, my family line literally has NO emotion, at least on my dad's side
lol, you don't have to listen to my crazy ramblings if you don't want, i just put my thoughts onto paper sometimes XP
my thoughts are usually pretty morbid.... DX
anyway, i hope you keep up the writing!! it's a great poem, really!
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