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SinoStefan [2016-03-15 21:50:12 +0000 UTC]
awesome practice there sir!
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Shalfm In reply to NPAW [2015-02-26 13:52:08 +0000 UTC]
ty ty!
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athenapallas87 [2015-02-23 19:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Digital-Mastery Critique
I can tell that you worked in a gray scale before color, because the values are really well done. They're crisp and with a nicely strong contrast that enhances the environment. Blues and oranges go very well together, and the transition is done quiet well. Additionally, the hint of a building in the distance helps create a sense of depth and atmosphere. And the choice of a Dutch angle gives the viewer the vague feeling of unease that gives this landscape some mystery, to its benefit.
My concern is that there are two uses of bright, eye-catching focal points: the figure and the bright light coming from the outside. This tells me conflicting messages about what is important in this piece. Should I be looking at the figure or the building? The building is centered, and has several objects framing it that also point towards it. But the figure has the most significant color contrast... and at the same time is sequestered off into the corner. My advice here would be to decide what is really important (such as a story or environment concept), and focus more on that aspect. Each part is well done in itself, but the impact is not as strong as it could be with a clearer vision behind the art. Once that's decided, you can figure out where you want people's eyes to go.
Overall, it's a good concept with a lot of potential in several directions!
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OnionCatNinja [2015-02-23 08:48:08 +0000 UTC]
well done!
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Shalfm In reply to OnionCatNinja [2015-02-23 14:01:17 +0000 UTC]
Really great to have feedback from a good artist as you,
ty!
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OnionCatNinja In reply to Shalfm [2015-02-24 00:42:17 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome man! keep going forward together
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TemperTempest [2015-02-13 17:48:49 +0000 UTC]
Gosh I could see this structured used in a D&D game!
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Shalfm In reply to TemperTempest [2015-02-13 21:49:46 +0000 UTC]
haha, i love D&D, miss being paladin and rogue ;C
but really glad you liked it!
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AlbaBoowy420 [2014-10-17 18:53:25 +0000 UTC]
fuckin cray, reminds me of a dream
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RespicePostTe [2014-08-11 18:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! great lighting!
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Shalfm In reply to RespicePostTe [2014-08-11 20:06:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much.. i'm kinda lame at discovering how light reacts.. but i'll get there ;]
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RespicePostTe In reply to Shalfm [2014-08-11 22:46:04 +0000 UTC]
Seriously? It looks fine to me! And you've got a great red/blue balance.
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Shalfm In reply to ewmh1 [2014-08-11 14:29:08 +0000 UTC]
I actually can, i'll try to post it later!
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FreeScope [2014-08-10 20:40:48 +0000 UTC]
I love it
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Shalfm In reply to FreeScope [2014-08-11 14:29:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the kind words sir! ;]
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joeypoolart [2014-08-10 18:22:32 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!! Great Angle and Colour palette, this image reminds me of cool movie cinematography!
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Shalfm In reply to joeypoolart [2014-08-11 14:30:13 +0000 UTC]
Really? that's so cool to know, it's what i'm aiming for!
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duesterheit [2014-08-09 14:26:11 +0000 UTC]
great!
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Shalfm In reply to duesterheit [2014-08-11 14:30:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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KPEKEP [2014-08-09 10:34:49 +0000 UTC]
very cool
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Shalfm In reply to KPEKEP [2014-08-11 14:30:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you sir!
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Shalfm In reply to Elisa2B [2014-08-08 19:48:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much Elisa,
it was really cool working with the light on this one...
working with values always helps a lot!
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