zombieater [2015-05-05 22:46:19 +0000 UTC]
This is outstanding, very impressive! A critique? How, if I'm speechless?
The work in the skin of the turtle is what I like the most. The back of the neck, and the neck itself, are amazing. The use of whites add a lot, indeed feels a little as a carving. The palette is good gives you that vintage feeling.
Now, the composition is nice, has a good amount of movement, a dinamic pose, but the oval keeps it all in place. I'm not sure if theyre flying or swiming, which adds to the fantastic. And yes, it's very steampunk.
Now, there's something with her anatomy, between the chest, shoulders and neck, which bothers me a little, but I can't tell exactly what it is. And I feel that the back fins of the turtle are missing.
Besides the skin, what I like the most is the headgear on the animal. Oh, and the finished poster looks great too.
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zombieater In reply to ShannonTrottman [2015-05-07 18:13:58 +0000 UTC]
Well, all of this is very interesting, and I'd really like to see how you develop this techique and style. So... I guess you got yourself a new follower.
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