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Published: 2013-12-02 00:57:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 653; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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ARTIST'S COMMENTS Here's a new sketch of Sarah I drew to work in as her new reference picture
According with some tips, I checked some about how the gravity works on breasts and other artist's pictures to make the breasts on a different way, I'm very happy with the current result
As always, that's just a sketch, then please tell me what should I change on it before start the inking, every help is appreciated (the twerk on her foot is an example, I fixed if after somebody told me to do it 
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I am glad to see you return in confidence Sharky!Β
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You're welcome
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An example from the book, which is in your case.
www.cedricstudio.com/2013/08/sβ¦
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I think you should change everything. You have drawn the boobs well but the body and pose so need some work. It does show you have used guidelines and shapes but you don't seem to do it much where you should draw her many times in different poses till you get the right one. The pose looks boring and not so dynamic where she's just holding the gun and that's it, needs more then that.
You did well with the clothes but the pose and anatomy still needs work, here's an example.
i39.tinypic.com/2v0err8.jpg
i40.tinypic.com/2s0zrls.jpg
I did this quick which there will be errors but to give you an idea of how to use shapes and give it a more dynamic feeling.
I recommend getting this book.
www.cedricstudio.com/sparkbookβ¦
I just bought and also work for both beginners and professionals, give you an idea of how to make your poses more interesting.
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Thanks for the tips, I'll try to remake the sketch
Β I'll consider buying the digital version of the book, too
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