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I'm drawing Page24 now.If there is something of wrong in characters' lines. Please teach me right English.
Thank you!
By the way, One of visitor is a black wolf. He looks like Oto's brother. But his eyes are red. It's different from her brother's eyes which were marine blue.
Studing β Studying
Careless mistake.
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Read everyone elses thing...but It sounds fine as is...oh well ^^
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Studying, not studing ^^ also I'd have said "this elderly silver wolf" or "the elderly silver wolf," whichever you prefer. I think that's all though. Other than that, another beautiful page by the looks of it ^^
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Thank you very much!
"Studing" I already noticed it.
Careless mistake... I'm ashame...
"This" or "The". I see. I will correct it.
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It's alright 
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LOOOOOOOOOOL
that's great!!
Love first panel
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you're welcome
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Awesome 
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I already corrected several mistakes.
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Yappa, zero kara no e tte hontouni sugoiyone! Tegakino houga PC system wo tsukatteru yori koseitekina design ya style ga kireini mieruyo! Taihenna sagyou, maikai gokurousamadesu! Orewa, anatano jitsuryoku ya sainouni akogaremasuyo!
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Wow! Nihongo-de comment-wo arigatou.
Anata-no Nihongo-ha hontou-ni jouzu-desune.
Koseiteki! Saikou-no homekotoba-desu. Arigatou! XD
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wow almost no errors your improving
all panels are correct except for the last panel:
uhm... not.... maybe its a accidental resemblance or just my imagination. my brother's eyes are marine blue like mine.
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DΓ΄ itashimashite ....
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"Takeru! Good timing. Let me introduce you to them. The elderly silver wolf is an old friend of mine."
"I'm Yasamuro, a Spiritual Stones scientist. And he is my pupil Izuna."
"Hi! Nice to meet you! It's a great honor to mee the Hero of Fire's son."
"!! Thank-you! It's nice to meet you too."
"Uhm... No... Maybe it's just an accidental resemblance... Just my imagination... My brother's eyes are marine blue like mine."
"What's wrong? Oto..."
Your English is getting better and better.
Funny thing, I was playing that DS game, "Izuna: Legend of the Unemployed Ninja" today. XD Anyways.
Can't wait to see it done.
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Thank you very much!
I will correct them!
Izuna is one of character in Japanese legend.
I can't explain concretely about it now. Because his name "Izuna" includes one meaning in my story.
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No prob. ;3
Ah, okay. C: And you don't have to explain, I'll just be confused until I harrass one of my friends to tell me.
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ALMOST PERFECT!!! I proud of you, Sheltie!!
Three VERY VERY VERY small corrections ^^
"The Elderly silver wolf is an old friend of mine"
"I'm yasumarou; a scientist studying the Spiritural Stones"
and
"My brother's eyes are marine blue... like mine."
But, it's still understandable, even if you don't change it! good!
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Thank you very much as always!
I will correct them!
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Hate to point out another, but the quote, "Just my imagination" could be, "Is it just my imagination". It's fine the way it is sort of... but for better grammer it should be the other way around. Sorry if that puts you done. Still, love the art!
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"Is it just my imagination?"
Thank you! I will correct it.
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No problem, just trying to help a friend is all!
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Thank you! Now I'm coloring it!
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!!!! yah!!! and your welcome!
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It should be "Elderly silver wolf is an old friend of mine" rather than "is the old friend of mine"
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"The"! I see. ^_^
Thank you!
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