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This is another oldie I dredged up. It is based on a Reddmann photo set I commissioned many years ago & wrote a 'go along' story to indicate my vision for the photo set & Redd's interpretation of the outline I provided. This was written after the set was completed & even contains some notes I made to Redd. I hope you enjoy it!

(This scenario is based upon Sharon’s photos from her 1st schoolgirl set!)

Sharon arrived home from school & flopped down on the couch in the family room of her parent’s house. She didn’t even bother to change out of her school uniform of a white blouse, navy blue mini skirt with matching knee socks & black loafers. It was Friday night & she had big plans for the weekend, but she wanted to finish her homework tonight so she didn’t have to worry about it all weekend. She riffled through her books until she found the subjects she needed to work on.

She then leaned forward & gently set her books down on the floor in front of her. Her large binder notebook had everything she needed; pens, paper & the textbooks she was going to study. It was heavy, but Sharon was athletic & fit. She had no trouble lower the ponderous notebook down.

Once she had her notebook on the floor, Sharon slid off the couch & knelt on the floor next to it. She always studied better when she was comfortable. The hard concrete floor covered by course carpet was not what most people would call comfortable, but it would keep Sharon focused so she would not drift off.

Sharon could feel the hard floor bit into her soft knees, but she ignored it as she rifled through her notebook until she found the book she wanted to work on 1st. she groaned as she picked out one of her least favorite subjects, figuring by getting the worst ones done 1st, it would make it easier to finish up with the subjects she liked.

Once she had picked out the book she wanted, she lay down on the floor, stretching her long shapely legs out behind her. The floor really wasn’t all that uncomfortable once she was sprawled out. It provided much better support than her soft bed or the couch would have & supplied a stable base for her to work on. Sharon got busy on her homework.

She was quickly engrossed. She didn’t even see the huge pale green toothy snout appear from the laundry room & slowly slink into the family room. The enormous crocodile Chomps had slipped through an open window while everybody was out. He found the cool laundry room a perfect place to sleep. Chomps heard sounds of movement that disturbed him, but he caught a delightfully familiar scent that drew him into the family room.

He quickly spotted Sharon & recognized the delightfully curvy girl as a human female. His favorite meal! His eyes roamed over her shapely body. She looked quite delicious! His mouth began to water. Oblivious to his presence, Sharon began to slowly kick her legs leisurely. The sight of succulent muscles rippling beneath smooth bare skin caused Chomps to drool freely.

He was very hungry & fate had provided him with the perfect meal to break his fast. He slowly creeped toward her, not wanting to move too fast to alert her to his presence. His eyes never left her delectable body. His muscles were steeled to rush forward & grab her should she spot him & try to escape. There was no way he was going to allow her to get away!

Sharon continued to study unaware of the hungry predator making his way toward her. Her long brown hair provided the perfect blinder cutting off her peripheral vision so she couldn’t see the approaching monster. Sharon still had a slim chance of escape if she could just spot the creature soon.

Instead, Sharon rolled on her left side, putting her back to the reptile stalking her. She propped herself up on one elbow. The floor had gotten a bit uncomfortable on her hips & elbows. Had she rolled the other way, she would have spotted him immediately. Fate was definitely not on her side. Chomps couldn’t have asked for more. He began to move more quickly toward her.

Sharon slipped off her elbow & lay totally on her side. Chomps was pleased. She was an easy target now. No way could she get up quickly enough to run away. He opened his mouth to be ready to receive her as he continued forward. Sharon began to rub one leg against the other slowly, casually. Sharon was a beautiful, sensuous girl & she unconsciously did things like this to draw boy’s attentions to her. The sight of socks & silken bare skin rubbing slowly against each other had caught Chomps’ attention & distracted him momentarily from his quest.

Suddenly, Sharon rolled on her back, resting her textbook on her breasts. She slid her legs up off the floor, crossing them & bobbing one foot. Her skirt slid down her silken thighs, revealing every inch of her shapely legs. She was still engrossed in her work & hadn’t spotted Chomps. Her quick move caught Chomps totally by surprise. He froze & dropped his open top jaw back down, catching it just before it slammed shut with sharp teeth clicking against one another so as not to alert his prey.

Unfortunately, Sharon did spot the movement out of her now unobscured peripheral vision. She gasped & lifted herself back up onto her elbows. A cold chill raced up her spine. She was not alone in the room. She didn’t move at 1st, not wanting to even look to see what was there. She tried to peek out the corner of her eye, but her hair again blocked her view.

Terrified, but knowing she had to see what was there, Sharon slowly turned her head. Her blood ran cold as her first view was of Chomps’ long enormous pale green body stretched out for what seemed like an endless length. She didn’t know what it was? All too soon though, his head came into view with it’s huge toothy grin.

Chomps knew he was spotted. There was no sense in trying to hide himself anymore. He opened his mouth wide & roared at her. His experience with human females was that they tended to freeze rather than run if you appeared terrifying enough to them. He hoped to have this effect on Sharon.

Sharon’s face crinkled in horror at the sight of huge creature! Her mouth dropped open in a loud scream. She instinctively put out her closest hand to block the monster from her. She had never seen anything like this beast. What was it doing in her house & what did it want from her?

Chomps knows he’s won & rushes forward to claim his prize. The seemingly helpless girl just lies there waiting for him. Her screams are annoying but once she is in his mouth, those will quiet down.

(I liked the next series of photos so I opted to add them to the scenario!)

Sharon watches in horror at the approaching monster. She raises her right hand in a futile gesture to shield herself from him. She continues to scream as he gets every closer. Flight hasn’t even crossed her mind yet.

Chomps actually rises up to snare the helpless girl. Sharon even obliges him by instinctively lowering herself back to the floor making herself a helpless target. This is going to be easy!

(This is a slightly different take on the next group of photos!)

Chomps slams his jaws together, but misses his target. His jaws crash together just short of Sharon. The force does knock her to the floor. There is no longer any doubt as to the monster’s plans for her. He means to eat her!

Sharon reaches out & grabs Chomps’ jaws as he tries to snap at her again. She forces them back as best she can. Her legs flail & kick as she tries to keep him at bay. Chomps tries to force the issue, but he is slightly off balance & can not muster all his strength against her. An odd & deadly sort of tug-o-war ensues between both prey & predator.

(Now we’ll move on to the scenario I outlined in this email!)

Unable to grab his intended meal, Chomps disengages. Sharon quickly takes advantage of this opportunity & scuttles away until her back hits the couch. She can see that the monster is blocking her only avenue of escape. She decides that maybe if she gets up on the couch, she will be out of his reach. Maybe she can out maneuver him & still escape. At the worst, she can wait him out until her parents get home.

Sharon turns & tries to pull herself up onto the couch. The soft floppy cushions hinder her progress as she desperately claws her way up. Chomps rushes forward & grabs Sharon’s legs in his jaws. He drags the screaming girl off the couch. Sharon finds herself on her back, her lower legs totally within his mouth. Chomps begins to gulp her in. Sharon fights back, screaming, punching & kicking. “Let me go you creep! I’m not food! Stop trying to eat me!”

Her legs slowly disappear into his mouth. Sharon can feel the wet slimey surface of his mouth on her bare skin & saliva soaking into her socks. She still kicks her legs as best she can. She is sitting up punching at his face as she continues to scream & shout at him. “Let me go! Help! Somebody help me! A monster is trying to eat me!” soon her hips slip inside. Her skirt rides up but she is way past caring about modesty. She is forced down on her back as her waist disappears. She continues to pound on his snout with her fists. She also rips at his flesh with her nails.

Sharon is slowly sucked in. she feels her wiggling feet & legs restricted by a tight tunnel. She knows she is being swallowed. This thing means to eat her whole & alive. She continues to struggle as best she can. Her legs wiggle even in the confined space. His jaws open & close now & then allowing Sharon to watch her legs disappear once more, this time down his throat. It is not long that Sharon is totally within his mouth. Only her long hair can be seen outside his jaws. His jaws move slightly as she continues to squirm from inside him.

Suddenly, Chomps’ jaws open revealing the squirming terrified girl. Sharon just lies there for a moment, unsure of what is going on? She braces for some sort of coupe de gras. She looks down & sees her legs are totally down his throat. She takes a chance & rises to her elbows. She slowly begins to crawl out of his mouth. She pulls her legs out of his throat. She feels her knee socks slide down her smooth lower legs as she does but that is the least of her worries.

She continues to slowly slide herself out of his mouth. Once she is clear, his jaws slam shut. Terrified, she scuttles away from him until her back again slams into the couch. There she pulls her legs up, wrapping her arms around them curling her body into a tight ball. She stares terrified & the still beast. Her mind eventually eases from the horror & begins to wonder why he let her go? Did she not taste good to him? Had this just been some sort of animal ploy to gain her attention?

Chomps doesn’t move. Prey & predator stare at each other for a while. Sharon slowly relaxes & begins to uncoil herself. She sees the door way leading to the stairs. Her escape route! She slowly moves forward & begins to crawl toward & then past the monster that nearly ate her. She keeps her eyes riveted on him, ready to jump to her feet & run at the slightest twitch.

Chomps is also watching. He eyes the girl as she crawls by him. Once her upper body is past the end of his snout, he strikes! His head turns & his jaws open as he lunges for the girl. Instead of rising up & running, Sharon is knocked to her side. Her hands raise & again catch his jaws before they get hold of her. She begins to scream again. “No! Please Don’t eat me! Help!”

Chomps has more leverage this time & Sharon’s arms are forced down. They collapse shortly, but she can’t clear them from his mouth. They are sealed inside. Chomps begins to suck the screaming squirming girl into his mouth. Soon , her screams are muffled as her head slips inside. Sharon flails her body about. Her legs kick wildly as she is slowly devoured.

It isn’t long before Sharon’s butt bumps against his upper jaw. She is face down this time & she looks up to see the throat open before her. Her final destination is near! Sharon loses the will to fight anymore. Her legs stop their wild kicking & drop to the floor. Chomps begins to swallow her. Her hips slip into his mouth. She wiggles her legs in short choppy kicks from time to time but offers no major resistance.

As her silken thighs enter his mouth, Chomps opens his jaws again to reveal Sharon’s head & shoulders are already with in his throat. Her arms lie at her sides. She still wiggles her hands body & legs from time to time as she is slowly swallowed. Sharon can feel her body squeezed by the tightness inside his throat. She imagines this is what it feels like to be toothpaste. Her torso disappears & is soon followed by her hips. Only her legs lay on Chomps’ lower jaw now.

In the dim light, Sharon eventually sees an opening. She guesses that she has arrived at his stomach, her true final destination! She begins to panic a bit. She wiggles her shoulders & cries out “No! No!” as she realizes her journey is about to end with her being squeezed into his stomach to be digested. In his mouth, her legs kick a little harder than they have in a while. Chomps is not concerned. There is no escape for her!

Sharon’s head & shoulders disappear into the stomach as her once again docile legs slip down his throat. They still wiggle now & then, but quickly disappear. Sharon’s torso is now gone. Her fingers wiggle from her hands pressed tight against her hips, before they too are lost as her skirt disappears into the stomach. Sharon’s long slender shapely legs are the last to go. They slowly slide down into the stomach. They come into view & disappear. Her still sock clad feet arrive to bring up the rear. Sharon gives one more final vigorous kicking session as her feet slip into the stomach.

Sharon is rolled into a tight little ball within his stomach, her arms wrap around her legs, her knees are pressed into her breasts, as her heels are pushed into her butt. She looks much the same as she did when she curled up in front of the couch after she escaped from Chomps the first time he tried to eat her. She lays & awaits digestion.

Chomps lies still savoring the lingering flavor of the delectable girl he has just eaten. His belly is full for now. His jaws close & he relaxes. A short belch escapes his lips as Sharon replaces the air in his stomach. He eyes her remains, her shoes & her textbooks. He remembers the vision of the succulent girl that lay there before. She had been one tasty meal!

Description
This is another oldie I dredged up. It is based on a Reddmann photo set I commissioned many years ago & wrote a 'go along' story to indicate my vision for the photo set & Redd's interpretation of the outline I provided. This was written after the set was completed & even contains some notes I made to Redd. I hope you enjoy it!

(This scenario is based upon Sharon’s photos from her 1st schoolgirl set!)

Sharon arrived home from school & flopped down on the couch in the family room of her parent’s house. She didn’t even bother to change out of her school uniform of a white blouse, navy blue mini skirt with matching knee socks & black loafers. It was Friday night & she had big plans for the weekend, but she wanted to finish her homework tonight so she didn’t have to worry about it all weekend. She riffled through her books until she found the subjects she needed to work on.

She then leaned forward & gently set her books down on the floor in front of her. Her large binder notebook had everything she needed; pens, paper & the textbooks she was going to study. It was heavy, but Sharon was athletic & fit. She had no trouble lower the ponderous notebook down.

Once she had her notebook on the floor, Sharon slid off the couch & knelt on the floor next to it. She always studied better when she was comfortable. The hard concrete floor covered by course carpet was not what most people would call comfortable, but it would keep Sharon focused so she would not drift off.

Sharon could feel the hard floor bit into her soft knees, but she ignored it as she rifled through her notebook until she found the book she wanted to work on 1st. she groaned as she picked out one of her least favorite subjects, figuring by getting the worst ones done 1st, it would make it easier to finish up with the subjects she liked.

Once she had picked out the book she wanted, she lay down on the floor, stretching her long shapely legs out behind her. The floor really wasn’t all that uncomfortable once she was sprawled out. It provided much better support than her soft bed or the couch would have & supplied a stable base for her to work on. Sharon got busy on her homework.

She was quickly engrossed. She didn’t even see the huge pale green toothy snout appear from the laundry room & slowly slink into the family room. The enormous crocodile Chomps had slipped through an open window while everybody was out. He found the cool laundry room a perfect place to sleep. Chomps heard sounds of movement that disturbed him, but he caught a delightfully familiar scent that drew him into the family room.

He quickly spotted Sharon & recognized the delightfully curvy girl as a human female. His favorite meal! His eyes roamed over her shapely body. She looked quite delicious! His mouth began to water. Oblivious to his presence, Sharon began to slowly kick her legs leisurely. The sight of succulent muscles rippling beneath smooth bare skin caused Chomps to drool freely.

He was very hungry & fate had provided him with the perfect meal to break his fast. He slowly creeped toward her, not wanting to move too fast to alert her to his presence. His eyes never left her delectable body. His muscles were steeled to rush forward & grab her should she spot him & try to escape. There was no way he was going to allow her to get away!

Sharon continued to study unaware of the hungry predator making his way toward her. Her long brown hair provided the perfect blinder cutting off her peripheral vision so she couldn’t see the approaching monster. Sharon still had a slim chance of escape if she could just spot the creature soon.

Instead, Sharon rolled on her left side, putting her back to the reptile stalking her. She propped herself up on one elbow. The floor had gotten a bit uncomfortable on her hips & elbows. Had she rolled the other way, she would have spotted him immediately. Fate was definitely not on her side. Chomps couldn’t have asked for more. He began to move more quickly toward her.

Sharon slipped off her elbow & lay totally on her side. Chomps was pleased. She was an easy target now. No way could she get up quickly enough to run away. He opened his mouth to be ready to receive her as he continued forward. Sharon began to rub one leg against the other slowly, casually. Sharon was a beautiful, sensuous girl & she unconsciously did things like this to draw boy’s attentions to her. The sight of socks & silken bare skin rubbing slowly against each other had caught Chomps’ attention & distracted him momentarily from his quest.

Suddenly, Sharon rolled on her back, resting her textbook on her breasts. She slid her legs up off the floor, crossing them & bobbing one foot. Her skirt slid down her silken thighs, revealing every inch of her shapely legs. She was still engrossed in her work & hadn’t spotted Chomps. Her quick move caught Chomps totally by surprise. He froze & dropped his open top jaw back down, catching it just before it slammed shut with sharp teeth clicking against one another so as not to alert his prey.

Unfortunately, Sharon did spot the movement out of her now unobscured peripheral vision. She gasped & lifted herself back up onto her elbows. A cold chill raced up her spine. She was not alone in the room. She didn’t move at 1st, not wanting to even look to see what was there. She tried to peek out the corner of her eye, but her hair again blocked her view.

Terrified, but knowing she had to see what was there, Sharon slowly turned her head. Her blood ran cold as her first view was of Chomps’ long enormous pale green body stretched out for what seemed like an endless length. She didn’t know what it was? All too soon though, his head came into view with it’s huge toothy grin.

Chomps knew he was spotted. There was no sense in trying to hide himself anymore. He opened his mouth wide & roared at her. His experience with human females was that they tended to freeze rather than run if you appeared terrifying enough to them. He hoped to have this effect on Sharon.

Sharon’s face crinkled in horror at the sight of huge creature! Her mouth dropped open in a loud scream. She instinctively put out her closest hand to block the monster from her. She had never seen anything like this beast. What was it doing in her house & what did it want from her?

Chomps knows he’s won & rushes forward to claim his prize. The seemingly helpless girl just lies there waiting for him. Her screams are annoying but once she is in his mouth, those will quiet down.

(I liked the next series of photos so I opted to add them to the scenario!)

Sharon watches in horror at the approaching monster. She raises her right hand in a futile gesture to shield herself from him. She continues to scream as he gets every closer. Flight hasn’t even crossed her mind yet.

Chomps actually rises up to snare the helpless girl. Sharon even obliges him by instinctively lowering herself back to the floor making herself a helpless target. This is going to be easy!

(This is a slightly different take on the next group of photos!)

Chomps slams his jaws together, but misses his target. His jaws crash together just short of Sharon. The force does knock her to the floor. There is no longer any doubt as to the monster’s plans for her. He means to eat her!

Sharon reaches out & grabs Chomps’ jaws as he tries to snap at her again. She forces them back as best she can. Her legs flail & kick as she tries to keep him at bay. Chomps tries to force the issue, but he is slightly off balance & can not muster all his strength against her. An odd & deadly sort of tug-o-war ensues between both prey & predator.

(Now we’ll move on to the scenario I outlined in this email!)

Unable to grab his intended meal, Chomps disengages. Sharon quickly takes advantage of this opportunity & scuttles away until her back hits the couch. She can see that the monster is blocking her only avenue of escape. She decides that maybe if she gets up on the couch, she will be out of his reach. Maybe she can out maneuver him & still escape. At the worst, she can wait him out until her parents get home.

Sharon turns & tries to pull herself up onto the couch. The soft floppy cushions hinder her progress as she desperately claws her way up. Chomps rushes forward & grabs Sharon’s legs in his jaws. He drags the screaming girl off the couch. Sharon finds herself on her back, her lower legs totally within his mouth. Chomps begins to gulp her in. Sharon fights back, screaming, punching & kicking. “Let me go you creep! I’m not food! Stop trying to eat me!”

Her legs slowly disappear into his mouth. Sharon can feel the wet slimey surface of his mouth on her bare skin & saliva soaking into her socks. She still kicks her legs as best she can. She is sitting up punching at his face as she continues to scream & shout at him. “Let me go! Help! Somebody help me! A monster is trying to eat me!” soon her hips slip inside. Her skirt rides up but she is way past caring about modesty. She is forced down on her back as her waist disappears. She continues to pound on his snout with her fists. She also rips at his flesh with her nails.

Sharon is slowly sucked in. she feels her wiggling feet & legs restricted by a tight tunnel. She knows she is being swallowed. This thing means to eat her whole & alive. She continues to struggle as best she can. Her legs wiggle even in the confined space. His jaws open & close now & then allowing Sharon to watch her legs disappear once more, this time down his throat. It is not long that Sharon is totally within his mouth. Only her long hair can be seen outside his jaws. His jaws move slightly as she continues to squirm from inside him.

Suddenly, Chomps’ jaws open revealing the squirming terrified girl. Sharon just lies there for a moment, unsure of what is going on? She braces for some sort of coupe de gras. She looks down & sees her legs are totally down his throat. She takes a chance & rises to her elbows. She slowly begins to crawl out of his mouth. She pulls her legs out of his throat. She feels her knee socks slide down her smooth lower legs as she does but that is the least of her worries.

She continues to slowly slide herself out of his mouth. Once she is clear, his jaws slam shut. Terrified, she scuttles away from him until her back again slams into the couch. There she pulls her legs up, wrapping her arms around them curling her body into a tight ball. She stares terrified & the still beast. Her mind eventually eases from the horror & begins to wonder why he let her go? Did she not taste good to him? Had this just been some sort of animal ploy to gain her attention?

Chomps doesn’t move. Prey & predator stare at each other for a while. Sharon slowly relaxes & begins to uncoil herself. She sees the door way leading to the stairs. Her escape route! She slowly moves forward & begins to crawl toward & then past the monster that nearly ate her. She keeps her eyes riveted on him, ready to jump to her feet & run at the slightest twitch.

Chomps is also watching. He eyes the girl as she crawls by him. Once her upper body is past the end of his snout, he strikes! His head turns & his jaws open as he lunges for the girl. Instead of rising up & running, Sharon is knocked to her side. Her hands raise & again catch his jaws before they get hold of her. She begins to scream again. “No! Please Don’t eat me! Help!”

Chomps has more leverage this time & Sharon’s arms are forced down. They collapse shortly, but she can’t clear them from his mouth. They are sealed inside. Chomps begins to suck the screaming squirming girl into his mouth. Soon , her screams are muffled as her head slips inside. Sharon flails her body about. Her legs kick wildly as she is slowly devoured.

It isn’t long before Sharon’s butt bumps against his upper jaw. She is face down this time & she looks up to see the throat open before her. Her final destination is near! Sharon loses the will to fight anymore. Her legs stop their wild kicking & drop to the floor. Chomps begins to swallow her. Her hips slip into his mouth. She wiggles her legs in short choppy kicks from time to time but offers no major resistance.

As her silken thighs enter his mouth, Chomps opens his jaws again to reveal Sharon’s head & shoulders are already with in his throat. Her arms lie at her sides. She still wiggles her hands body & legs from time to time as she is slowly swallowed. Sharon can feel her body squeezed by the tightness inside his throat. She imagines this is what it feels like to be toothpaste. Her torso disappears & is soon followed by her hips. Only her legs lay on Chomps’ lower jaw now.

In the dim light, Sharon eventually sees an opening. She guesses that she has arrived at his stomach, her true final destination! She begins to panic a bit. She wiggles her shoulders & cries out “No! No!” as she realizes her journey is about to end with her being squeezed into his stomach to be digested. In his mouth, her legs kick a little harder than they have in a while. Chomps is not concerned. There is no escape for her!

Sharon’s head & shoulders disappear into the stomach as her once again docile legs slip down his throat. They still wiggle now & then, but quickly disappear. Sharon’s torso is now gone. Her fingers wiggle from her hands pressed tight against her hips, before they too are lost as her skirt disappears into the stomach. Sharon’s long slender shapely legs are the last to go. They slowly slide down into the stomach. They come into view & disappear. Her still sock clad feet arrive to bring up the rear. Sharon gives one more final vigorous kicking session as her feet slip into the stomach.

Sharon is rolled into a tight little ball within his stomach, her arms wrap around her legs, her knees are pressed into her breasts, as her heels are pushed into her butt. She looks much the same as she did when she curled up in front of the couch after she escaped from Chomps the first time he tried to eat her. She lays & awaits digestion.

Chomps lies still savoring the lingering flavor of the delectable girl he has just eaten. His belly is full for now. His jaws close & he relaxes. A short belch escapes his lips as Sharon replaces the air in his stomach. He eyes her remains, her shoes & her textbooks. He remembers the vision of the succulent girl that lay there before. She had been one tasty meal!