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shiari — Sleep well, my darling.
Published: 2007-06-05 02:53:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 2225; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 14
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Description Sleep well, my darling, you’ve earned your rest.
You played your part, and did your best.
There’s no more trials, and no more tests,
Relax, enjoy your sleeping.

For night is coming near,
and the ending of this story.
The sun is westering,
see the last flames of its glory.

All was calm and all was still,
on this solemn morning.
The sun did rise, with shuttered eyes
and your troubles died aborning.

For night is coming near,
and the ending of this story.
The sun is westering,
feel the last flames of its glory.

Night shall come unto us all,
a sweet and secret lover,
and we shall claim that dark embrace,
and then seek for no other.

For night is coming near,
and the ending of this story.
The sun is westering,
free the last flames of its glory.
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Comments: 29

freely-casualunknown [2015-04-06 13:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful I thought It was a story about something else but I'm glad you could id some sort of solace  in the tragedy Great job

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Tiiffeh [2009-09-01 11:07:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm so deeply touched by these words you have conjured up, such bittersweet to depart with a pet. They will truely know, more than anyone how much each word means to you. Just lovely.

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seleina-scorpio [2009-04-14 14:23:08 +0000 UTC]

omg so beautfull, can you put up the actuall sont, my computer isnt letting me listen to it

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Kieranfoy [2009-01-12 06:51:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry to hear about your cat. It's hard to lose a pet; I felt the same way when my Arnold died in my arms.

You never do get over it, do you?

The poetry was beautiful, even though the link didn't work. I very nearly cried.

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peekbo [2007-06-08 20:13:21 +0000 UTC]

aw.. im all teary

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Tsaka [2007-06-07 01:36:04 +0000 UTC]

That's very beautiful, both the poem and the song. I'm sorry about your dog, I know what it's like.

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Karnalis [2007-06-07 00:07:44 +0000 UTC]

The loss of a pet does make for a troubled time, but it's good that you can honor yours with such a wonderful thought as this. It's a lovely poem indeed.

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Ginnabean [2007-06-06 20:45:24 +0000 UTC]

This is truly beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss, I know pets are some of our closest companions and it's always hard to lose one.

This makes me think ofmy first cat, Biscuit. I'll repeat what somone earlier said - I've ever favorited a poem before, but I did this one.

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shiari In reply to Ginnabean [2007-06-06 23:37:55 +0000 UTC]

thankyou very much, and I'm sorry about your kitty.

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LibertyRenegade [2007-06-06 04:01:03 +0000 UTC]

My greatest condolences for your loss. I'm sorry it had take that turn.

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Ninva [2007-06-06 03:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Aw, this was sweet, but so sad. A little on the bittersweet side.

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shiari In reply to Ninva [2007-06-06 23:37:06 +0000 UTC]

thankyou, and the bittersweet is definitely true. All pets are bittersweet. They are a joy, but we know that their lives are so much shorter than our own for the most part.

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kaons [2007-06-06 01:35:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is a really beautiful poem. Gee... This is one of those that gets you thinking.

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shiari In reply to kaons [2007-06-06 23:35:45 +0000 UTC]

thankyou. One of my vets inspired this originally two years ago as she whispered the opening line to a sick and hurting kitty she had just euthanised. I immediately had to go and write that whole thing down. I didn't have to edit a thing, or really think about the lyrics. It just flowed out.

I find it a very comforting and sad poem.

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kaons In reply to shiari [2007-06-08 04:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh really? You have a very awesome vet to say something like that. Aren't those the best though? The literature or poems that just flow naturally. That's so wicked that this happened to you with this poem.

This really is a gorgeous poem, and sad.
Thank you for sharing such a powerful poem.

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kmaier99 [2007-06-05 20:15:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry.

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luka89 [2007-06-05 17:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

Sorry to hear about your dog.

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rhaeigan [2007-06-05 14:13:01 +0000 UTC]

very nice poem!

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shiari In reply to rhaeigan [2007-06-06 23:38:14 +0000 UTC]

thankyou very much.

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EvaLilith [2007-06-05 04:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Sorry to hear that It's a very sweet tribute.

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Gwizdo [2007-06-05 04:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Never faved a poem, before..... But this is juast way too sweet.

Thank you for sharing.

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shiari In reply to Gwizdo [2007-06-06 23:33:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm honored then that you chose to fave mine.

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Gwizdo In reply to shiari [2007-06-07 13:07:14 +0000 UTC]

*hugs*

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KaiserFlames [2007-06-05 03:52:35 +0000 UTC]

.u_u.

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DracoFeathers [2007-06-05 03:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Very touching and beautiful, you did a great job on putting emotion into it.

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ArtbySandiJohnson [2007-06-05 03:28:08 +0000 UTC]

sob, sniffle

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jkarrah [2007-06-05 03:08:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry to hear about your dog. It's cold comfort, I know, but at least he's not in pain any more

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shiari In reply to jkarrah [2007-06-06 23:39:43 +0000 UTC]

*nods* and he was very sore, and very confused/scared at the end. ;_; That's what cemented it for me, that he was acting half anesthetized... wobbly, uncoordinated and he was scared. ;_; So because of that, I'm only sad for me, not him.

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Gorghte [2007-06-05 03:01:54 +0000 UTC]

Sorry to hear that you had to put your dog to sleep. This is a nice poem, I hope it helps you through this tough time.

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