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ladyyatexel [2008-03-05 06:30:47 +0000 UTC]
I hope you weren't too angry at 19. 20 helped out, yes?
I think the main crit I have for this is that the body shapes aren't fleshed out underneath the clothes. The clothes look like they're hanging loose, but since the bodies in the clothes aren't defined, either by shading or lines, the bodies themselves look a bit wiggly. Johnny's torso in particular.
I totally love Johnny's eyes, though. And Edgar's face entirely. He looks so satisfied.
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ShiiLovesHim In reply to ladyyatexel [2008-03-05 23:11:38 +0000 UTC]
thank you! I really appreciate getting crit. every once in a while, And I do have trouble with skinny in baggy, I need to work on that.
yeah haha I was really sad at 19 but 20 was a great improvement! 19 even got my friend to write her own so I'm pleased over all.
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PunchBagBobsRevenge In reply to ShiiLovesHim [2008-03-03 05:56:12 +0000 UTC]
I love this picture but edgar's left foot (our right) is weird. It's like...leg...leg...FOOT! HAH, caughtcha by suprise didn't I?! -_- I'd like more shading there. And as a side note, johnny's right arm (our left) is freaking me out. O.o
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