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Published: 2009-01-26 00:58:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 378; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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whos up for a great round of 'hobo fights?'
DFINALLY DONE WITH THIS the lining took all last night and coloring took most of today since Weeds kept distracting me XD;;
yeah, so... crit?
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I have no idea what's going on and I don't care because Pepito is distracting me with his awesome. You draw the hands I wish I could.
Critique. Um, considering how thin both of them are, perhaps you could have added a little gauntness to their faces? And it may be I'm comparing them to Pepito's, but the trannie's hands seem a tad small.
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thanks, ha, he was so hard to get the body structure for XD;
I think this is close to the style that I'll use on your shopping scene maybe
the scanner ate almost any shading, they used to have darker coloration under their eyes, and several shows of their bone structure underneath for the 'gaunt' look but alas, my scanner is only a cheap one thrown on top of a nice printer.
Thank you though, I'll have to be more careful to get the colors obviously there on their face
her hands I'll have to watch my size on them, I think his (which are supposed to be huge) threw off the size there, but it looks about like my usual size. I draw hands too small pretty often really. ><; Thank you so much for pointing those out ^^!
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I AM I AM
and pepito's right hand makes me very happy. uhmmmmm, critique...uhm, mabye her eye is slightly too high up...? but thats just a nit-pickety detail.... I CANT THINK OF ANYTHING
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me too... off to Seattle for me! >:3
ohh her eye is too high! Thanks idk why I didn't see that! feed me nit-pickety details! ><;; I need them.
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I like the lines, I have to say. And Pepi's ragged pants make me laugh.
For crit... um. I guess the tranny hooker could hve a more attacking/threatening pose going on. And them startlingly-yellow boots are calling a lot of attention to themselves.
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thank you, I always feel pretty shoddy about my line quality. >> hee me too.
That is true, her pose is kind of minimalistic there. Bad thing? XD; I'm sorry, OI asked my friend for a trashy color of boots and she mixed intense yellow for me lol, I may dull them down on the original, they look a little too clean.
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Some shading would probably do it, with the boots. They look like they're glowing a bit, right now.
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God, the way you draw is so fuking amazing. I love it so much!
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Haha, thanks hubby XD; 
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