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xxMetalgirlxx [2011-09-06 22:32:06 +0000 UTC]
thats gatta hurt O.o
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Shioji-san In reply to LyricaBelachium [2010-02-19 19:52:33 +0000 UTC]
I see what you mean about the different coloring since it would give them more depth
Hmm I see I should probably just do normal text rather than write those myself if it be difficult to read
*notes to try and work on pained expressions*
And no it's not harsh at all Constructive criticism = good comment x3
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LyricaBelachium In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-19 19:54:59 +0000 UTC]
lol, you have good hand lettering, wish I knew how to do that, but I have 0 experience in that and how no idea how to learn it.
it would just help if the letters were either more separated from each other or bigger. or maybe simply a thiner line if thats possible.
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AutobotWheelie [2010-02-11 15:16:43 +0000 UTC]
this is so cool!
Cant wait to read more
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XxNiGhTsToRmXx [2010-02-11 13:44:17 +0000 UTC]
This is getting good. I wonder what info Sparklight is trying to obtain...?
I have to say you are really good at drawing the TFA style! Awesome job!
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Shioji-san In reply to XxNiGhTsToRmXx [2010-02-11 14:21:38 +0000 UTC]
You'll learn soon enough as for what he wants x3 and soon after that why he wants it xD
Thank you I'm glad you liking the style
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Nortstar [2010-02-11 11:01:12 +0000 UTC]
wow that page look so awsome
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AznLi [2010-02-11 06:54:57 +0000 UTC]
you're really good at this! 8D I look forward to seeing more! 8D
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Shioji-san In reply to AznLi [2010-02-11 06:58:03 +0000 UTC]
How dare you be online and not on MSN! >< I should shoot you! *takes Sparklight's cannon and shots you* >D
and thank you I'm glad your liking this ^^
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AznLi In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 07:00:14 +0000 UTC]
XD blame this crappy wi-fi in the airline lounge!
yes.
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Shioji-san In reply to AznLi [2010-02-11 07:07:17 +0000 UTC]
lol
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Himikay [2010-02-11 05:53:40 +0000 UTC]
fun!!! silly Autobot lol
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Shioji-san In reply to Himikay [2010-02-11 05:57:42 +0000 UTC]
Yes trying to call for help, shame on him
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Himikay In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 06:00:24 +0000 UTC]
I know right? don't those silly Autobots know that Prime doesn't help anyone? I mean he's working for their creators, hence why he's trying to kill off HALF(if not more) of the Transformers.(I mean really how much more Decepticons are there then Autobots?)
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Himikay In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 19:13:50 +0000 UTC]
yea, but I think in over all numbers through Cybertron, I seem to remember it being said in the comics that the Decepticons had a larger number because all the seekers belonged to Megatron. But that is to say my brain is working
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AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 05:48:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh boy, Sparky seems to be enjoying it >.o Poor mech! Can't wait to read more XD
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 05:51:35 +0000 UTC]
Though even as a con he saw torturing as wrong, he always did love the control he had over the mechs
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 05:56:15 +0000 UTC]
Sparklight lost alot of memories before this, even before he started feeling sorry for these mechs so yeah he will be cruel, though this is nothing compared to what he does to him later >3
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 05:59:05 +0000 UTC]
Oooooooo! I'm excited/dreading the next part XD
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 06:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Out of curiosity I'm assuming that Camshaft was also cold and cruel in her decepticon days
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 06:25:10 +0000 UTC]
Of course. But she held a level of sympathy for hurt bots, though she never showed it. She was also on recon missions alot, so she was either alone or with her mentor.
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 06:41:37 +0000 UTC]
yay for mentors xD i think
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 06:43:06 +0000 UTC]
Lol, yeah for the yay. He was a good mech, by con standards XD Fiercely loyal to Megsy. Imagine how shocked he was to hear his ward had defected.
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 06:50:39 +0000 UTC]
Bet he's hunting her down to kill her huh 8D LMAO
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 06:53:33 +0000 UTC]
Something like that XD He's hoping to capture her to wipe her memory and return her to the ranks, while installing a code that would make her a true Con in every way. Now only if they can catch her XD
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 06:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey Sparky knows how to do that! lol
I'm assuming she's a slippery one xD
Hey wanna talk more in the chat room, maybe rp too? (maybe xD )
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 07:00:39 +0000 UTC]
HEY I'M WORKING ON AN ESSAY TOOO! 8D
I see your point xD
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 07:02:55 +0000 UTC]
Lol! BOO FOR ESSAYS!!!
Lol, yeah XD
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 07:05:34 +0000 UTC]
What is your essay on? Mine is on the education system and how it fails us 8D
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 07:14:41 +0000 UTC]
Lol, it's for a test XD I have to write it, then rewrite it in class. I think I'm gonna fail tho TAT
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 07:19:05 +0000 UTC]
oh so it's an in class essay I hate those ><
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 07:19:40 +0000 UTC]
Seriously >< Such a pain!!!
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 07:20:35 +0000 UTC]
yup though at least it does help doing it the night before
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AumbreSuai In reply to Shioji-san [2010-02-11 07:21:55 +0000 UTC]
Lol, yeah. It's fresh in the mind that way XD
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Shioji-san In reply to AumbreSuai [2010-02-11 07:22:59 +0000 UTC]
yup also you tend to think of more when your doing it in class too
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