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Characters (c) Itoh Ukiko
Lineart (c) rubyd

I wanted to do another shading job, though this one doesn't look as good as "Saved by the Knight"... no offense to the artist. It's just this style doesn't fit as well with my type of shading... Oh well, live and learn.
Besides, I wanted to try to do a little harsher lighting, like a spotlight. Then of course, I had to find background curtains...
Though this pose actually doesn't look like something for the stage... Ahiru sort of looks like she's being seductive...
Anyway, I don't quite know what to think of the result... Any comments? Suggestions? Reassurances? Arguments? Anything?

EDIT: Darkened the lines that desperately needed it.
Poor little lines... I had forgotten them...

My Interpretation of What's Happening:
Fakir has written a play about them, and they are finally getting to perform it. I imagine he whispered something in her ear, and she is turning to respond. Perhaps it's scripted... perhaps it's not...

Description
Characters (c) Itoh Ukiko
Lineart (c) rubyd

I wanted to do another shading job, though this one doesn't look as good as "Saved by the Knight"... no offense to the artist. It's just this style doesn't fit as well with my type of shading... Oh well, live and learn.
Besides, I wanted to try to do a little harsher lighting, like a spotlight. Then of course, I had to find background curtains...
Though this pose actually doesn't look like something for the stage... Ahiru sort of looks like she's being seductive...
Anyway, I don't quite know what to think of the result... Any comments? Suggestions? Reassurances? Arguments? Anything?

EDIT: Darkened the lines that desperately needed it.
Poor little lines... I had forgotten them...

My Interpretation of What's Happening:
Fakir has written a play about them, and they are finally getting to perform it. I imagine he whispered something in her ear, and she is turning to respond. Perhaps it's scripted... perhaps it's not...