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Hey, this is kleinmeli from "traditional-media", sorry it took so long to critic your work.
I like your drawing. The idea is good and it makes me realize that I haven't looked at Manga/anime stuff in ages.
But now for the actual critic.
You have good lines in your drawing.
I think if you choose a different media it would do you good.
You don't put much contrast into your work, so doing it with a pen/ink would work wonders here.
The lines would be more powerful and wouldn't lose on such a background.
(Sometimes it's all about presentation.)
I know you can't erase pen lines one you are done, but thats a risk you should definitely do!
Other than that a few proportions look off, like is shoulder and hands, but that is a thing you will learn with every drawing you do.
To help with handy just draw your own over and over again. It gives you the right feeling for it.
Hope it helped a little, if you have any questions, feel free to ask.
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thank you for the tips, this was really helpful!
one question though: if i were to try a different media, should i go with digital, meaning with a pen tablet? or were you referring to something not anime/manga-related?
thanks again for your critic
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With a different media I men an actual pen...not a pencil like you used one.
I will be the last person telling you to use a tablet.
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thank you ^-^ and welcome to deviantart!
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your welcome
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Wonderful, I've always wished I could draw like this 
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