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Published: 2009-10-05 22:16:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description when i whispered,
"i trust you,"

it meant

i trust you
to love me.
i trust you
to never hurt me.

but
it also meant

i trust you
to hurt me
if you no longer
love me.
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Comments: 12

laura-beth467 [2009-10-06 19:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Really simple way to show the vulnerability that you have when you are in love or completely honest with a person. I really like how striking the feelings are.

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shootingstar2428 In reply to laura-beth467 [2009-10-06 20:08:41 +0000 UTC]

thank, laura. that's exactly what i was going for.

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laura-beth467 In reply to shootingstar2428 [2009-10-06 20:40:26 +0000 UTC]

I hoped that I got it correctly, yay for me

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shootingstar2428 In reply to laura-beth467 [2009-10-07 02:12:43 +0000 UTC]

you get an A+

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tonelokeart [2009-10-05 23:37:45 +0000 UTC]

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shootingstar2428 In reply to tonelokeart [2009-10-06 01:30:53 +0000 UTC]

...?

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tonelokeart In reply to shootingstar2428 [2009-10-09 22:13:03 +0000 UTC]

i think it was just my reaction to this piece.

sometimes i can't think of words to say.

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shootingstar2428 In reply to tonelokeart [2009-10-09 23:05:43 +0000 UTC]

haha, i understand.
i hope it was a good reaction.

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tonelokeart In reply to shootingstar2428 [2009-10-09 23:09:28 +0000 UTC]

definitely.

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CaronCecilia [2009-10-05 22:33:55 +0000 UTC]

very profound....and so true....i like it...

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shootingstar2428 In reply to CaronCecilia [2009-10-06 01:31:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Osiristhrasher06 [2009-10-05 22:23:02 +0000 UTC]

...

a person much wiser than I told me that a poem is not just meaningless, dumb thoughts.

What's this one about, then?

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