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Published: 2004-06-14 02:34:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 18
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Midnight.Silent as the witching hour
A bat flutters
Tiny, glistening eyes
Dart
back
and
forth...
Fragile,
Leathery wings
Beating
up down up down
rhythm
rhythm
rhythm
Fangs
Almost miniscule
Glimmer in the moonlight
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Comments: 20
cool! i probaly understand something completly different that you wanted me to, but cool
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thanks... its just a bat, i dont see how could understand anything different but ah whatever.
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Bats are awesome. ^_^ I like how you have each word in "darting back and forth" on a separate line - it really gives the feel of movement.
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that's kinda what i was trying to do
By the way you never responded to my question... do you use msn messenger?
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Oh sorry. I thought I answered you. *is losing her mind* lol. Yes, I have messenger, but I'm hardly ever on it. I'm sister_senshi@hotmail.com
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yea ur not talented .....ur super talented!!!!
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gosh. the poem's layout looks like a drunk bat.
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I was kinda trying to give the illusion of motion. Or perhaps... something else. Thanks for the fave... despite the fact taht this is probably the worst poem i have up.
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Will eet turn into a vampire? Huh? HUH? I like it lotsnlots. Bats are beeeautiful creetures. I saw one up close once. It was sssoooo fuzzy!! I wanted to pet it!! ^_^
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No, it's just a bat... and I love em.
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they're be-yootiful aminals.
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oh shut up, you're really talented so shut up.
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meeehhh then if I am you are TOO!!!
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