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Description Featuring Éliot (age 6) and Eli's babyantlers ♥
Winter, Year 758 of the New Age
Sorghum Peak, Windborne

OF COURSE related to The Windborne Splinter Alliance

Something was going on.
It was everywhere - in the forests and the rivers, in the rough soil and in the air. It had been in the whispers of the playful autumn winds, and now it was in the roar of winter's newly born storms.
Every critter running around on Windbornes mossy grounds seemed to smell it.
Danger.

Long before he heard it with his own ears from his father’s mouth, he had somehow known it.
But now, that he knew the truth, it filled him with ice cold shivers; as if the winds that already escorted winter down the mountains had somehow managed to get inside his chest, leaving a strange feeling of fear, even hopelessness inside of him.
His home was no safe place anymore.

He had heard it several times now - not spoken out loud as an open truth, rather as something poisonous that had been whispered from ear to ear in his father’s group of guardsmen.
“The worst case we could have imagined”
“An Alliance between the Point and the Cape?”
“I told you so! We allowed them to grow too strong - now it will be our death!”
“It’ll be war, I see it coming”
The young stag’s thoughts drifted to his fawnhood, to his mother, who now lived somewhere out there. For many years he had believed that she had been kidnapped, that the does at the Point were criminals; outlaws who didn’t fit into the rest of the herd, who disagreed to its laws and thus isolated themselves. Their disloyalty confused him. He knew that something had to be the reason of their isolation, but his father was too fixated on their schemes and his duty to stop them to get different information out of him.
He was a guard, he had a kingdom to serve against which they had turned; ergo, they were enemies and had to be battled. Easy as that.
Equally easy to accept for Éliot, who saw his home threatened. Reasons aside, no reasons could be severe enough to turn against your own people like this, he thought.
A coming war was matter of fact for some, others said that it was only a phase.
Fact was, the Guard lacked in numbers to stand up against any threat.
 


The wind blew strong on the Peak, and Eli shuddered with every step. Sharp ice crystals cut into his eyes and clamped on his hide, soon leaving it clammy and frozen to a stiff mass. It was a strange melody the wind screamed today, a furious song that hurt in his ears and wiped every thought off his mind. Blues and greys danced in front of his eyes; coldness and death filled winter’s battlefield, coldness and death had overcome the little tufts of sweet snowgrass that stuck between ice cold rocks and other frozen plants.
It looked like winter had surprised them; beneath the cover of frost, they still looked fine, only their lives were frozen in time by the harsh winds.

It was an forbidding place to roam at such a day.
And yet the wind had something powerful in it, a destructiveness that was just surpassed by its arrogance, its claim to be unstoppable, invincible, the undoubted ruler of its kingdom.
It drew Eli into its arms, seemed to search for his company. Here on the peak the buck felt a strange power pulsing inside of him - a power that was connected to the wind without doubt. 
Power!
Eli’s limbs trembled, trying to warm the body with a bit of movement, but in vain. The buck’s body lacked muscles or fat that could have kept away the deathly cold. If he only was stronger!
He had lost fights this year, more than he could count. Most of them had been playful fights with his friend, but he’d lost nonetheless; a fact that had left a little crack in his self-confidence.
Not that he’d admit that to anyone.
He wanted to be strong, and big, and useful for his kingdom, especially now in times of menace. There was a duty to fulfill.

Eli turned around and let something draw him back. He walked on - he slid over rocks - he jogged - he ran - he leapt. An excitement formed in his heart and mind, and drove away all cold in his inside. Left behind was a big feeling, a giant feeling, an enormous feeling, a gigantic monstrosity of feeling!
With big leaps, he jumped down the hill, back into the forest, where his father was waiting.
“Sir!”, he gasped.
“I request to be accepted as a part of the Guard!”

Words: 769
+2 magic (art and 400-999 word story) (counting to magic, because he's, like, noticing what magic could feel like - slow steps are still steps after all ♥)

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After he said that....they probably laughed at him.
Oh, Eli. What are you doing, silly boy? You'll never be a soldier, better stick to your poems and songs, kay? *pats head* 

I sketched this thing SO LONG ago, and I finally found time to colour it while I was away.
Typing out the story took as long as usual, but I really wanted to write something like that.. I'm so excited for everything that happens/will happen in WB, and it's the perfect opportunity to develop this little conflict inside of him, as well as his (and his father's) loyalty, as well as his attitude towards magic.
I guess the story probably sucks, but oh well, I tried to get involved. xD

Art, Eli (c) by me, no ref used
(c) by Ehetere

by the by the by.. I've always wanted to title a deviation like that |3 *snort*
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Comments: 48

Arlunwyr [2014-09-09 00:18:12 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful job on this!

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Shotechi In reply to Arlunwyr [2014-09-09 11:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Arlunwyr In reply to Shotechi [2014-09-10 05:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Np!

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PinkLionArt [2014-07-19 12:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Das Bild sieht so richtig schön 'kalt' aus, ich kann mir die Atmosphäre extrem gut vorstellen*_*

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Shotechi In reply to PinkLionArt [2014-07-19 12:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Danke! C: mja mit Farben kann man manchmal Wunder wirken xD

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PinkLionArt In reply to Shotechi [2014-07-20 09:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Hmhm gerne^^

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Aliyska [2014-06-28 14:12:26 +0000 UTC]

*guckt sich um* WAARRRTTEEE. Ich hab das noch nicht gecommentet? Shame on me ._.
Also erstmal: Die Geschichte ist herrlich geschrieben, richtig atmosphärisch. Und Eli hab ich ja eh schon total lieb gewonnen, der ist so süss
Und dann das Bild.  Ich... aw man, ich weiss gar nicht, was ich dazu sagen soll. Pffsch, es ist einfach wunderschön Dx -drools all over- 

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Shotechi In reply to Aliyska [2014-06-30 19:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Vielen vielen Dank! auch, dass du die Geschichte magst ich bin immer froh, wenn die überhaupt Leute lesen xD
ahaha xD *wischt zufrieden auf*

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agata507 [2014-06-28 08:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Look at that cute face!
I love your compositions of arts. They have especially soul in themselfs.
And that blue light on Eli's coat adds him a lot of live, the same with black shadows!
 

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Shotechi In reply to agata507 [2014-06-30 19:55:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, dear!

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DodgerMD [2014-06-27 15:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Großartiges Bild und großartige Geschichte!
Ich glaub an dich, Eli! Du wirst ein richtig toller Guard!
Wenn er mal Magic trainieren möchte, Starling kann da sicher helfen. Der is zwar ansich eher für die Allianz, als dagegen, aber da seine Family ja eigentlich sich eher raus halten, würde er seinem alten Freund da bestimmt helfen. ;3

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Shotechi In reply to DodgerMD [2014-06-27 22:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Vielen vielen Dank!
Ich hab schon Pläne in meinem Kopf, das wird spaßig, die in die Tat umzusetzen  
aach Starling, so ein Netter (: wenn es reinpasst, bestimmt gern!

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DodgerMD In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-29 06:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Ich freu mich schon drauf!
Super gerne, wie gesagt, er hilft ihm da bestimmt gern mit ner Magic Lehrstunde oder Zwei. Könnte vielleicht auch recht interessant sein, wo Starling ja ansich für die Allianz ist und so. ;3

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zephuko [2014-06-27 13:52:31 +0000 UTC]

boah du kannst umgebungen so schön beschreiben, in meinem kopf entstehen so schöne bilder nur von deinen worten x3 
aww Eliii xD na hoffentlich geht da alles gut aber huhuuuu, das draaama wird kommen, das riech ich schon! xD
und das bild, das bild, aww, wie immer *schmelz* du hast den wind so schön 'gezeichnet', so wunderbar deutlich gemacht! es sieht auch richtig hoch aus, mit dem blauen licht bringst du nen tollen kälteeffekt dazu, huuu, so cool!

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Shotechi In reply to zephuko [2014-06-27 22:15:05 +0000 UTC]

DAS WIRD SO VON DRAMA TRIEFEN, MEHR GEHT GAR NICHT °U°
vielen, vielen Dank!  
aww danke (: ich schreib so gern, mittlerweile auch auf Englisch, da ist solches Feedback natrlich Balsam für die Seele °u°

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zephuko In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-29 22:07:30 +0000 UTC]

ASDFKLSJDF WUNDERBARRR
dawww dann wälz dich mal schön im balsam x3

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uniccin [2014-06-26 01:24:30 +0000 UTC]

huuuuh das blau macht ganz schön was her!!
sieht klasse aus ^^

was genau kannst du eigentlich nicht? zeichnen kannste, schreiben kannste, dein abi is supergeil .. mensch mensch mensch ^^

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Shotechi In reply to uniccin [2014-06-26 20:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Vielen, vielen Dank! C:
awww mann *versteckt sich* <.<

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uniccin In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-27 15:38:29 +0000 UTC]

brauchst dich nich zu verstecken  

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Fibonacho [2014-06-25 14:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Wuuuut...so süß Und so viel Wind O.o Hehe^^ Hab am Anfang irgendwie voll an nen Wolf gedacht xD

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Shotechi In reply to Fibonacho [2014-06-25 20:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Dankeschön!! :3
haha, Windborne ohne Wind wär wie... Hundekuchen ohne Hunde. ID

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Fibonacho In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-26 16:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha, stimmt

Boah, Sky, btw ich muss dir was verraten *-* Wir haben ein neues Pferd im Stall, sooooo süß! Und rat mal, wie sie heißt: Milly! Ich musste nur voll an Windmill denken, als ich das gehört hab :3 xD *will Milly unbedingt bald reiten*^^

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Shotechi In reply to Fibonacho [2014-06-26 19:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Eeeh ist das cool!
wie sieht sie aus? xD

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Fibonacho In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-27 07:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Sie ist richtig hübsch Hat einen so eleganten wohlgeformten Kopf mit geradem Profil und einen sanften Blick udn ist ganz lieb, man kann zu ihr hingehen und sie streicheln oder sie kommt auch gleich zum Zaun wenn irgendwas los ist. Sie ist richtig sanft :3 Sie ist halt ein Fjordi (mit noch schöner Stehmähne ) und hat ein helles ocker als Fellfarbe (wieß grad nicht, wie ich das beschreiben soll, wirklich ocker ist es auch nicht, vielleicht so wie gaaaanz helles gold oder so xD) Ich bin mir grad nicht sicher, aber ich glaub sie hat kein einziges Abzeichen oder vielleicht an den Beinen eins (ich kenn sie ja jetzt noch nicht so lang). Aber sie hat einen Beinstellungsfehler, ich glaube die sind vorständig, aber ich meine mich zu erinnern, dass das nicht so schlimm ist^-^
Sie ist relativ groß, also größer als Sally und hat sich gleich mit unserer braven Zicke angefreundet Die sind so dicke xD Man sieht richtig, wie die Tinkermadam sie gleich immer verteidigt und sich zwischen den stellt, der sie angiften will :3

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Shotechi In reply to Fibonacho [2014-06-27 22:29:06 +0000 UTC]

awww oh mann °_____° das klingt total süß C: 
ich mag Fjordis total, ich kenn einen uralten xD mit Bananenrücken <3
ach so süß C: wenn du dazu kommst, Fotos zu machen, würd ich die absolut gern sehen xD und ich wünsch dir, dass du sie mal reiten darfst (: klingt wie ein sehr umgängliches Pferd ^^ 

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Fibonacho In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-28 11:07:30 +0000 UTC]

Jaaa, das ist sie auch :3
Fjordis sind echt süß. Vor allem, bei uns sehen alle drei anders aus, der eine so cool und frech (Vorbild für Manabiko), dann Sally (Vorbild für Sally O.o xDD) und jetzt Milly, die sieht so sanft und lieb und bissl schüchtern aus x3
Ich werd mal schauen, was sich machen lässt Vielleicht kann ich demnächst mal ein Foto von ihr machen^-^ Aber ich wart lieber noch bissl, bis man ihre Narben nicht mehr so sieht :/

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Shotechi In reply to Fibonacho [2014-06-30 20:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww drei Fjordis auf einen Haufen, das stell ich mir auch total süß vor xD
klingt cool!

uii, ja mach das. O.O warum hat sie Narben? 

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Fibonacho In reply to Shotechi [2014-07-01 12:50:25 +0000 UTC]

Ja, sind sie auch x3

Der eine Fjordihengst fands nicht so toll, dass sie auf einmal mit im Stall stand und bei einem Ausritt hat er sie ziemlich oft in die Seite gebissen, also überall, an Schulter, Kruppe und so sind Narben. Da hatte sie so Angst, dass sie sich angepinkelt hat D: Dabei ist der Hengst sonst so lieb... :/

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Shotechi In reply to Fibonacho [2014-07-01 18:33:33 +0000 UTC]

ohaa ;-; die Arme!

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ReneeScarted [2014-06-25 11:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Very nice style!

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Shotechi In reply to ReneeScarted [2014-06-25 20:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Tigglesaurus [2014-06-25 07:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Gasp! Eliot you are so sweet and brave! I hope he doesn't get himself hurt D8 those horrible rebels can leave scars!

I love the story! It compliments the picture well. and as always, the artwork is heartwarming, even if it looks cold up there!

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Shotechi In reply to Tigglesaurus [2014-06-25 20:19:23 +0000 UTC]

ew, scars are ugly, but they make onestag look like a badass hero and girls like dat

I hope so, too! - I have no clue of what will happen to him, it depends on how the leaders continue the story around Windborne... 
that's the awesome thing about this interactive roleplaying one of the reasons why I love Fawnies and the Baconling-community that much ♥

Thank you so much! I'm especially glad that you like the story. (:

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Tigglesaurus In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-25 22:33:36 +0000 UTC]

YAY! *snuggles* I love it too, the way any character can influence the game, nomatter how big or small There's some more scuffle stuff coming up, set in 758, and we're working out some more major events so we can do some mass RPs on the subject, and little Eli is more than welcome to attend!

You let me know if he ever wants to run into a grouchy splinter doe, in the future or as a snippet of history, hehe. I'm still desperate to know if his mother still lives on the Point! I love watching Eli's story unfold ^_^

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Shotechi In reply to Tigglesaurus [2014-06-26 19:46:27 +0000 UTC]

That sounds epic. I'm sure he will (:

Ooh, I'm definitely up for that
It wouldn't really fit into his history - but now that he "appointed" himself as a guard, I can imagine him trying to be cool and useful and attempting to spy on the splinters (or something else) xD
maybe he could run into the grouchy splinter doe there
I only hope she doesn't stomp him into the ground for being annoying, I still need him for stuff <.<

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Tigglesaurus In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-26 20:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Teehehee, don't worry, she'd never be able to catch him How far does he roam, in what sort of timezone? 

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Shotechi In reply to Tigglesaurus [2014-06-26 20:45:51 +0000 UTC]

I think he'd follow Haven Creek (if that's its name) westwards until it flows into the sea - maybe somewhere there'd be the best place for them to meet? (though I don't doubt he'd be reckless enough to follow the coastline until he ends up right in the middle of them evil does xD)
and when... in Spring, maybe Summer of 759..?
would that fit?

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blaine-rr [2014-06-25 02:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Such an amazing piece!

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Shotechi In reply to blaine-rr [2014-06-25 20:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!

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bonefish [2014-06-25 02:16:00 +0000 UTC]

It's great to see such gorgeous traditional art. I especially like how you shaded and defined his musculature... it looks very realistic. Did you use colored pencil for this piece?

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Shotechi In reply to bonefish [2014-06-25 20:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Yes, I did, combined with a simple pencil for some additional shading ^^

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bonefish In reply to Shotechi [2014-06-25 23:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Looks great

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noebelle [2014-06-24 22:54:59 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely gorgeous! You are so talented!

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Shotechi In reply to noebelle [2014-06-25 20:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! (:

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decors [2014-06-24 22:50:40 +0000 UTC]

"Rai" say his antlers look cute

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Shotechi In reply to decors [2014-06-25 20:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Rai is such a sweet and considerate girl! °A°

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karzii [2014-06-24 22:49:09 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful! i will forever envy your talent with traditional art. it is really amazing.

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Shotechi In reply to karzii [2014-06-25 20:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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