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Published: 2006-07-21 00:15:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description You may not want to hurt me but in the end you’ll probably hurt me more
An invisible force field leaves you untouchable.
Out of sight out of mind,
Yeah right
The barrier grows thick
My growing passion yearns for the strength of you soul to aid mine
To fight battles together, would be amazing.
I see you right there so close, but so dam far.
Overwhelming misery overtakes all body and mind
I cannot function anymore
I try to make sense of this horrid reality that I am faced with this everyday
But I can’t help but to think that there is an inkling of a flame.
So passionate
So perfect.
What went wrong?
What is wrong?
Questions that I strive to answer, are incapable of having tangible answers.
There is no tangible sanity in this world of turmoil
Can’t there just be peace?
Though, what’s the point?
We are shadows and dust
We live in a world where we are too busy for out own good or board out of our socks
No happy medium

This leaves me standing on the edge of the world
The earth is flat
I am falling too fast out into the middle of space
With no one out but you to retrieve me
I am but a poor lost soul to make my way out into the world
Alone
As humans do.
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Comments: 11

ShotInTheHeart [2006-08-04 04:25:55 +0000 UTC]

sweet! i read it ...
truely amazing

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rebelicious [2006-08-01 08:14:58 +0000 UTC]

i'll have to read this again in a bit to get your meaning; one metaphor inspired me for a song/poem, you might like it (my mind went off in a tangent of it before i had a chance to grasp what you were getting across, so i started writing and then i'll reread)

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ShotInTheHeart In reply to rebelicious [2006-08-01 23:40:50 +0000 UTC]

ok? thanks?

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rebelicious In reply to ShotInTheHeart [2006-08-02 03:15:11 +0000 UTC]

it's a good thing, trust me!
i need to get a good pic for it first though, i finished writing.. it'll be up soon!

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ShotInTheHeart In reply to rebelicious [2006-08-02 19:07:09 +0000 UTC]

k
i really wan't to read it now

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rebelicious In reply to ShotInTheHeart [2006-08-03 08:05:10 +0000 UTC]

yay i'm done!

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okemi [2006-07-21 00:16:34 +0000 UTC]

so sad

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ShotInTheHeart In reply to okemi [2006-07-21 05:43:13 +0000 UTC]

well i hope we all eventually get a happy ending,, i am sick of being hurt

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okemi In reply to ShotInTheHeart [2006-07-21 16:37:49 +0000 UTC]

thats true, it always sucks to see someone else be happy while your life is like crap

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ShotInTheHeart In reply to okemi [2006-07-21 17:41:24 +0000 UTC]

indeed. :S

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okemi In reply to ShotInTheHeart [2006-07-21 19:09:11 +0000 UTC]

meh .. great poem

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