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At long last, my gift I give to the Transformer fandom. A short story with 50 fan-created transformers witnessing the fight of the INFINITY. When I have a chance, I’ll write down who’s who and email each of you. I don’t want to have no one miss out on what I made. So have fun reading it.
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I think it's pretty cool. the combiner duds look awesome, Id really like to see the end of the battle
and I want a date with the announcer girl
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*and I want a date with the announcer girl *
yes don't we all.
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yep
girls = hot
fast cars = hot
girls+fast cars = 2x hot
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Dear sir, this is simply smashing stuff - it's been well worth the wait, I can assure you! I remember seeing very rough previews of this presented way back when over in the defunct 'Twisted Metal' project (or was it on the Allspark...?) and I though it was looking good then. But this? Awesome! You've really outdone yourself this time, that's for sure. While the drawings themselves are reasonably symplistic (not at all to their detriment), the sheer amount of detail that has been injected into this collective work is utterly astounding! This is true of all seven pages comprised in this story, but I have elected to post this review here at the narrative's culmination (unless you'd like me to replicate it over all of the separate pieces, heh heh). You certainly have a vibrant flare for action, as these pages are abundant with genuine liveliness. Your linework is solid, and clearly sets everything out in fine detail, backed up by strong inks. The tonal application really gives an otherwise flat appearance a true sense of deapth, building out your already accomplished portrayal of perspective throughout. It's no secret that I much prefer full digital colours, but the monotonal approach you have elected to adopt really works for this exercise, I feel. While your art itself features a playful style, it never detracts from the seriousness of the characters, which is most impressive (although Trixter is too damn cute for her own good, dammit!). Ha, I really like the homage you've made to "Transfomers: The Movie" through choice snippits of dialogue - cleverly done. And gestalt interpetations of the key protagonists? Genius! It truly is a joy to behold such a collection of fan-originated characters in the one place... it seriously leads me to regret that I've yet to publish any of my own OCs, as it would have been an honour to be incorporated in some capacity. Oh well, such is the price of procrastination, I guess... At any rate, this is a magnificent achievement, and one you should be suitably proud of. I simply cannot wait to see what you bring us next - keep up the stellar performance.
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Wow!!!
Very nice review fellow cybertronian citizen. First off thanks for allot of what you had to say. You hit on allot of details, especially the flaws in my project. I realize I should of used a ruler on ALLOT of spots, but I was multi-tasking at the time, plus I wanted to complete personal deadlines at the same time. Yeah it was the All spark; I know nothing of Defunct's twisted metal project. I realize my style is quite simplistic (something I make an effort to stray away from), which is why I do my best complement it with other elements.
Yeah, I much rather of had this in color too, but the issue of time hovered over me. Plus Arty made a good point with the issue that when working with THIS many tf's, the colors will be insanely convoluted. On top of that a good a small number of them don't have any color at all. The last problem with color would have to revolve around the two gestalts. Their colors were never meant to be used in a gestalt, so they themselves would have a horrible color deco.
I once tried to be a serious artist, but it never worked out for me. I would become very depressed and quite bored. Which is one of many reasons why I adopted my anime cartoony style, and yes isn’t Trixter a sweetheart.
The story with the focus on gestalts came from an episode of Transformers Engergon/ Superlink. In where three gestalts combined at once, the stock animation was amazing and it really pumped my blood. Plus it’s a tribute to the love I have for combiners.
This hasn’t been the first time I made gestalts a role in a short story.
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So you have an original character huh? Well of it helps, spots are always open for my Chibitron comic funnies. In where I showcase Fan-TFs in a chibi-format, while focusing on Lieger’s antics.
Overall thanks for the big review. I have other short planned, though they won’t be TF fanfics.
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GSKJFADHL; cliffhanger! o_o
Trixter gave me a G Gundam flashback just now.
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i love that line. in my fan fic i made one of the decepticons say "See this hand of mine, it glows with an awesome power".
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That is an awesome beyond known language.
TFs and Gundam. My night is made.
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you expect me to do a 40 DBZ long fight? you crazy man.
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love it!
transformers were ace...ah the memories.
this stuff is kewl, where do you get the inspo from?
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*fants* dude. . this is like. . .oh my goodness like. . i'm sorry man just looking and reading this all was like out of this world man
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i hope you make an ending or alternate endings to this ^^ but id like beamer to win ^^ im always with the good guys. cept maybe if he's against devastator
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Like a choose your own adventure kind of book? i use to love reading them when i was a kid.
Beamer versus Devastator, no contest.
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Wow that was 8 pages of Impressiveness. I commend you on all your hard work. Makes my pet rock seem liike chump change.
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thanks man. though i'm led to believe that your rock would knock me out when it hts my head.
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More than likely lol. Graglore getz mean like that sometimes.
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I did an animation with him. He blinks. They don't let us put avi's here. Too bad.
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Totally!!! I've been working on another char today he's almost done
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Indeed it will be. Oh yes. It will be.
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thanks man glad you're liking it.
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