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levilover02 [2020-01-26 18:21:42 +0000 UTC]
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If I was you, I would have put
"I'm pretty sure my friends don't give a crap about school either, regaurdless of if we wanna see each other again"
XD
Maybe that's just me talking from how much I wanted to burn my school to ground, no joke, if it wasn't a crime, I would have taken TNT to that hell hole years ago!
Come on guys, Me and Lexy can't be the only ones who wanted to frecken destroy their school
Heck I don't go to school anymore and I still wanna blow it up, as revenge for all the years of Bullying, Homework, Detention, More Homework, Homework again and tretarus B****'s
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Silvaze126 In reply to levilover02 [2020-01-26 22:32:25 +0000 UTC]
This is the last time I'm going to ask you, please save my critic widget for critiques only. This should be a comment as it offers me no artistic feedback whatsoever
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levilover02 In reply to Silvaze126 [2020-01-27 00:34:01 +0000 UTC]
I did, I thought that Lexy could have sounded a bit more annoyed, I even gave an example
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JCFanfics [2020-01-27 06:27:55 +0000 UTC]
This is a good start.
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134racer [2020-01-27 01:55:19 +0000 UTC]
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Sunset-Peril [2020-01-26 20:10:27 +0000 UTC]
Holy cow, that's my parents all the time after breaks, ha ha ^^
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DianaFoxyDysDark [2020-01-26 19:14:09 +0000 UTC]
I hope she'll have a good day
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annonmyous [2020-01-26 18:08:36 +0000 UTC]
And so the first day of school begins
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Technus10 [2020-01-26 18:00:50 +0000 UTC]
😍😍😍
Lexy is so cute when she's mad.
Thank you for the update, friend.
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DukesToyBox [2020-01-26 17:58:04 +0000 UTC]
The silent pondering frame; there it is! XD The feeling is definitely conveyed well.
If there’s anything to point out this time...Levy’s mom’s head looks to be a bit far to the left? I tried seeing what happens when turning a head on a 3D model, but couldn’t come to a solid conclusion, so it may just be me looking for something that isn’t there.
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Esticalover1 [2020-01-26 17:37:14 +0000 UTC]
Can I be added to the tag list
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