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Published: 2019-11-13 16:39:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 577; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Time to start this comic off if I do say so myself! Though I can't promise a consistent upload schedule. Maybe every two weeks? idk, Maybe once a month th is a more realistic goal. Either way, keep an eye of for future updates I guess!
Though that did give me an idea. If you wish to be tagged in each new page to be notified of its release, leave a comment below letting me know! I do believe that's all I needed to say, enjoy the first page!
Cover Page 2 
Lexy Lynx belongs to me, Silvaze126
:bulletbkue: Songbird Story by me, Silvaze126
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Thank you! I'll keep this all in mind
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I love the style of your art for this, it looks really pretty, I can't wait for the next chapter
Alert me when the next chapter is gonna be released, I would like to know, I would love to see Midnight in this style to
Saddly my own sonic art isn't the best, I need more practise drawing, maybe some day I will reach this level, given I lack the proper art tools for such things
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I've said my thoughts on the pic now, so now I'm just filling space XD, can't post till I do
Good luck with the comic!
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Thanks for taking the time to right this, however its not exactly what I'm after.
Though an ego-boost is always nice, I'd prefer if this were only made as a comment. I say this because I've opened critiques for the express reason of getting constructive criticism to help me improve my own artwork. Though this is nice of you to say, it doesn't really help me out artistically.
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Oh, I'm not good at that, it wasn't how I was raised, my mother taught me to always say nice things, I'd feel awful if I said your art was bad in any way or form
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Being nice is always good, but when it comes to improving, niceties don't really take anyone far.
Imagine if say you weren't good at math, you never got any problems right. Instead of pointing out what you're doing wrong in your equations, the teacher just told you "You're doing good, keep it up!" You'd never learn.
When working on a skill, criticism is very important. Being aware of your faults is the most important part in getting better. That being said, just pointing out all the flaws is not helpful either, as it can tear you down. It's best to have a balance in the middle. Pointing out things done well as well as things that need improvement.
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Okay, then I'll tell you the only problem I had with it
Maybe a brighter backround, something that stands out ((The room I mean, maybe pink or blue walls))
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Hmm, alright. I'll keep that in mind for future characters
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Oh, what am I doing. I'm setting this page and the next ones to music like it's a movie. Incidentally, I'm thinking of Peter Schilling's - Major Tom (Vollig Losgelost), which worked for 2017's Atomic Blonde, so I'd say it works here as well.
Have a listen, if you wish. www.youtube.com/watch?v=hoW4Vw…
Now, on to the feedback I have.
I see you've used some pixel filter or something for the alarm clock. You made me look at my own alarm clock, and it seems more like it's a flat/gradient color being a backlit surface.
My own alarm clock, for reference. Major Tom, because something something visual gag. If the school has any digital alarm clocks in view, it may be better to have the numbers displayed on a color gradient than pixels.
The house walls. They're pure white! That's pretty had to come by...those walls could possibly benefit from a splash of color. Or grey. Since that's modern. Even changing the background to a slight off-white to match the cheap white paints you can find at home improvement stores might help make things look more natural.
www.behr.com/consumer/colors/p…
It's quite clear the panels are copied from each other with minor alterations, but for something this scale, no one should be giving you grief for it.
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I'll definitely keep it in mind! Not sure if the clocks will be making a re-appearance though
Though they are indeed pale, the walls are actually a light yellow. Thank you for the critique! I'll keep it in mind moving forward ^^
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Oh that is very pale. I can see the subtle differences now that I’m staring and zooming with my phone. Wow.
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I suppose I could have made it darker, however I was concerned it would blend in too much with her bed sheets
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Welp. Thanks for reminding me to look at my own walls. They're mostly white (and beige on the wall adjacent to the side of the building)....and dirty. Or have had some really spotty patchwork thanks to the previous tenant. Huh.
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Yeah, unless it's a children's bedroom, I find most walls are fairly plain
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I like the little intro with the characters morning routine. It's always a very cute start to a story and sort of adds a bit of a buildup to the story itself. I'm interested to see where it goes, and my advice would be to add your own little sprinkles of unique aspects to either the school or setting itself, just so it separates it from so many other school related stories. I am interested to see where you take it, that's just a bit of my perspective on this. I like the shading you went with, it looks almost like it's painted which I think is quite interesting for the story. Looking forward to seeing where it goes!
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Ill try my hardest, thank you! Hopefully my experience being in the Canadian school system will give me a little unique edge to it, seeing as pur school system is very different from the most commonly referenced American one ^^
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Ah yes, I'm interested to see what little tricks you've got up your sleeve!!! Schooling is cray different in different countries!!
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Very true. Even across Canada it's very different as each province has their own educational system. Though I learned that's not common in other countries
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Oh of course not. I mean just look at the crazy difference between public and private schooling. It's a different realm entirely!
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Oh hey, she woke up at exactly 6am? What are the chances that Lexy's gonna be late for school? XD Nice detail with her right eye too, I know it's supposed to look like that but it's usually covered in most Lexy pics.
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That's what alarm clocks can do to ya, they drill those times into your head XD
Maybe a bit of an exaggeration, but not far from my own experience ^^
I figured this'd one of my few chances to show it off, might as well make it count ^^
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It always starts on a sleepy morning. 😆
If you can, tag me if you decide to include my character.
Don't worry. I'm still curious about the comic.
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I will be giving credits in a mass Google Document as I have too many characters who'll appear at one point in time to keep track of.
I can tag you in every upload, tagging you only when you character appears may be a little difficult. Would that be ok?
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That's fine.
After all, you already have enough work to do. I shouldn't make more for you.
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You've been added to the list ^^
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I think the cover is good and am looking forward to see more good luck
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Please tag me I would like to keep up with your story 
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You've been added to the list ^^
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Credits will be given in a mass Google Document as I have too many characters who'll appear at one point in time to keep track of. If you wish to be tagged, It will be for every page regardless of prescence of not. Is that what you'd like?
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I see what you mean with the credits doc. I was thinking I’d challenge myself to point out the characters in each individual page when you post them.
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Alright, you're added to the list
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Already enjoying! This will be fun to read
If you wouldnt mind tagging me for releases that'd be nice.... things tend to get lost in the pool of watch notifications and I'd like to make sure I don't miss a page
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Thanks! I'm glad to hear it~
I understand the sentiment, hence why I offered
You've been added to the list!
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