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Skylight-Starbright [2008-11-18 20:15:11 +0000 UTC]
Teh best one-shot of these two I've read. X3
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Amapadme [2008-06-21 04:11:30 +0000 UTC]
After battle overloads are so cool because they are intense and bring some sort of healing to the couple, which you brought out very nicely here. Always love when Prowl is demanding too.
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SilverPhantom In reply to Amapadme [2008-06-21 07:27:53 +0000 UTC]
Thankies ^^ I always liked "after battle sex" type things
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Yondercat [2008-06-21 00:21:53 +0000 UTC]
I read this on FF.net too. and I'll say it again. I loved it.
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daebereth [2008-06-20 00:39:48 +0000 UTC]
Gyyyah, hot! That's one way to calm nerves.
Oh, nicely done. And that very last line from Jazz is awesome. Poor mech. He ain't gonna complain tough.
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SilverPhantom In reply to daebereth [2008-06-20 04:04:26 +0000 UTC]
I love "after battle" stories ^^
When has Jazz ever complain...
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SilverPhantom In reply to Ooupoutto [2008-06-20 00:31:34 +0000 UTC]
He's so fun to write! It's made me sad that I've implied the ProwlxJazz relationship, but never actually wrote it.
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Ooupoutto In reply to SilverPhantom [2008-06-20 01:06:07 +0000 UTC]
lol i bet he is! maybe i should start writing TF stories... humm....
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SilverPhantom In reply to Ooupoutto [2008-06-20 04:01:53 +0000 UTC]
Just to warn you, once you start, you might get sucked in ^^
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Tessombra [2008-06-19 17:57:05 +0000 UTC]
Ordinarily, I don't like my stories without them being about anything but having sex, but I seem to be developing a thing for JXP so--not bad.
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SilverPhantom In reply to Tessombra [2008-06-19 20:51:09 +0000 UTC]
I didn't want to write something long since I'm working on three as it is, but I wanted something short and hopefully sweet for the oneshots. Trying to also show emotion instead of just plain sex, I guess. *shrug*
Glad you like this one.
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BlueProwl [2008-06-19 02:15:04 +0000 UTC]
OH that was a wonderful Jazz and Prowl!! LOVE IT!!!!
Very beautifully written!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
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TaintedTamer [2008-06-19 01:50:54 +0000 UTC]
I love this pairing. XD
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SilverPhantom In reply to TaintedTamer [2008-06-19 03:12:50 +0000 UTC]
So do I! Apparently, I never write it >< Now I need to chose the next pairing to write.
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sharpshootah [2008-06-19 00:07:32 +0000 UTC]
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGYUSSSS. so good! Jazzy and Prowler finally get some attention and I looooved it. short and sweet and good. :]
the whole bonding scene was beautifully written and I love how you included they had bonded before; kinda set some things up in my mind I guess.
beautiful! as always! <333
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SilverPhantom In reply to sharpshootah [2008-06-19 03:10:43 +0000 UTC]
Half the time I like writing things that doesn't need a build of how the relationship happens ^^ Glad you enjoyed it!
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