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Published: 2015-01-15 13:09:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1009; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 6
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Description Watercolor - copic - ink
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Comments: 24

Spattysaur [2015-01-16 03:28:41 +0000 UTC]

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There's so many cool details in this piece! The little bits of blush and freckles on the character's elbows, shoulders, and face look cute, and help imply some shading without overcomplicating the cute chubby body. I also like the textural details in the little lines in the hair, pile of feathers in the arms, and the splatter of black watercolor in the background. (which also peeks into the foreground, adding more depth) The little dots and lines add a lot without becoming too busy. I'm also a big fan of the red/blueish-green contrast between the hair and skin/flower tones. I wish the background had reflected some of this sunny color scheme instead of a somber gray-- the lack of color puts a bit of a damper on the foreground. It also looks like the character's left eye overlaps the hair, where it should be behind the hair. Not a big deal, except that I'm not really sure what the character's expression is trying to say-- are they blushing? The eyes look a little sleepy.

Overall, great piece! I'll definitely fave this. 83

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SilviaVanni In reply to Spattysaur [2015-01-16 21:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the critique.
Sorry if it looks sleepy XD

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Spattysaur In reply to SilviaVanni [2015-01-16 23:56:58 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Don't apologize-- it's a really cool piece overall. 83Β 

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MayamitY [2015-01-30 17:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Aww so cute! I really like your style and the colour you chose!

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SilviaVanni In reply to MayamitY [2015-02-03 14:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^_^

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MayamitY In reply to SilviaVanni [2015-02-04 12:10:51 +0000 UTC]

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Mhonka [2015-01-15 21:20:30 +0000 UTC]

Is perfect!!!!
I love it
and the colours <3

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SilviaVanni In reply to Mhonka [2015-01-16 21:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^_^

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TheTubich [2015-01-15 19:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Looks Awesome

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SilviaVanni In reply to TheTubich [2015-01-16 21:10:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^__^

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TheTubich In reply to SilviaVanni [2015-01-16 21:46:33 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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ChaiLotte [2015-01-15 13:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh I love the colours and textures here! So wonderfully done

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SilviaVanni In reply to ChaiLotte [2015-01-15 13:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Entropician [2015-01-15 13:13:18 +0000 UTC]

carino!

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SilviaVanni In reply to Entropician [2015-01-15 13:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Sempre il primo a commentare.
Grazie mille ^_^

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Entropician In reply to SilviaVanni [2015-01-15 13:32:31 +0000 UTC]

per causa lavoro/disegno sono perennemente al pc, e non sono uno che se la tira, se vedo e mi piace commento

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SilviaVanni In reply to Entropician [2015-02-03 15:07:41 +0000 UTC]

Io preferisco mettere il "like" perchè ho un inglese pessimo e sono un orso bruno °_°

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Entropician In reply to SilviaVanni [2015-02-03 15:11:21 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha immagino, cioè immagino un orso bruno che disegna ste cose super carine hahaah (ci starebbe un disegnino eh?) cmq per l'inglese eh beh a volte bisogna solo buttarsi, tanto quando c'è da leggere complimenti credo che chiunque si sforzi un po di più nel capire cosa ti stiano scrivendo ehehXD!

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SilviaVanni In reply to Entropician [2015-02-03 16:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Ora lo dovrΓ² fare per forza quel disegno XD

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Entropician In reply to SilviaVanni [2015-02-03 16:25:26 +0000 UTC]

hahaha non so perchè ma avevo immaginato questo orso enorme che tiene tra le zampe gli strumenti del lavoro piccolissimi e il tutto piegato in 2 su un minuscolo kotatsu ahhaah chiaramente con tutta una serie di elementi che fanno capire che è un orso femmina e con un'atmosfera teporosa..oh mio ho detto sul serio teporosaXD

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SilviaVanni In reply to Entropician [2015-02-07 20:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Sappi che lo sto facendo (ma senza kotatsu).
La dovrΓ² mettere come id XD

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Entropician In reply to SilviaVanni [2015-02-07 20:22:08 +0000 UTC]

ahhahaa ok aspetto trepidante il risultato!

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Kasvei [2015-01-15 13:13:04 +0000 UTC]

omg ! those colours ! <3

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SilviaVanni In reply to Kasvei [2015-01-15 13:16:19 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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