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SimplyMisty — Fireflychase
Published: 2013-02-07 21:28:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 775; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 7
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Point commission from ~Tigermasked50--
EDIT: Ok guys, I know the muzzle is large, but when I first started drawing this her mouth was supposed to be open. I realized i wanted to close it at the end of the drawing, but I had already done the coloring, shading, etc. It would be too difficult to change it, and I already have many other commissions to work on.
Hurr hurr, testing styles I see?
Crap, I had coloring inside those tiny lines. especially with a mouse.
I also tried something different with the back ground and eyes. please let me know how you like it c:
Also, Sorry Tigermasked, But I couldn't find a ref. sheet for firefly chase. Since I mostly know she's grey, then I made her grey with green eyes.
Anyways, hope you like it <3
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Character: ~Tigermasked50 ©
Artist: Me ©
Made with Sumopaint and Sai
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Comments: 43
Ok I'm going to write you a REAL critique, because it seems that everyone is giving you more compliments than you should have. [not saying you're bad at drawing v - v because it looks fine. Just needs work.]
I know you said that the muzzle was messed up and stuff, but the muzzle should be more narrow on the top. And her head it gigantic?
The ear also is very odd shaped and should have an inside part, or else she wouldn't be able to hear anything.
Also her blush is literally going through her eye?
I like your eye style. It's unique in a way. But it needs to be placed more below where it is.
lso cats have whiskers on both sides of the face. I could barely make out the other whiskers
And where is the light source coming from? Because I don't understand the shading.
But it's a good start. I like the background, though its a little unoriginal.
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Wow I had a lot of grammar mistakes.
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Gah.. Hello Princess! C:
Let me start start out with...
AWESOME!!!! -Scream-
I love this all so much.
The background.. It's so... beautiful ;W;..
Love the colors and shading you did, also. C:
It's. very. beautiful.
I'm like.. jelly.. cause.. I wish that was me now.. because it's BEAUTY. o.o
The only thing I'd recommend is the muzzle.. I can't do any better but I just thought it's a little too big on the bottom.. could have been smaller.. c:
And I love the pink *blushing kinda* look. I love when people add that detail.. but I can kinda see three lines right on the beautiful eye.. It's so distracting ;W;
Otherwise, It's. so. epic.
I love it all!<3
Hope this critique helped and didn't offend! :3
~Coaler
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First time doing this~
This is amazing. I love the bg. Anatomy, eyes, background. Perfect~ The muzzle is a little bit too big. Cat's have a smaller muzzle. I saw that you added whiskers. Nice touch there! I would recommend that you'd make the whiskers look the same though. You don't have to though. So yeah. Your really improving~ I loooooooooooooooooooooooooove that new eye style~ I love how you put the name and go that idea. Cuse the whole fireflies and her name is Fireflychase Right. Well you
get my point. XD yepppers. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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~Bluecloud
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Dang, it's been a while since I did one of these. o_o
Okay, First off, This is amazing, as always. The background is wonderful, Very clear. Second, I love the pose, but her muzzle should be a little smaller, For a lion, tiger, big cat period, that would be the right size, But for a warrior/normal cat, The muzzle should be a little smaller, The top of the muzzle is fine, but the bottom should be up a little more. I hope that helped. xD
Okay, next, As usual, the eyes are amazing, as are the bangs. I think this is amazing. Very nice technique and vision. Try to improve on your muzzle style, and you should be good. <3
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Ty c:
Plz read my reply on twisterclaw's critique to see why I did the muzzle. :3
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Your welcome. And, I did. I understand now. xD
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Wow Misty! This is really great work. I love the background and how subtle it is, and the anatomy is good for the most part. As always, your eyes are incredible, and I like the structure of the shoulder. The shading is really well done, and I like the bangs a lot too. One thing I would change, is how big the muzzle is. Yes, large cats such as lions or tigers do have big muzzles, but regular warriors are just cats. I think the top of the muzzle is okay, but the bottom chin is just a little too big in my opinion. All in all though, I think your vision was very clear and I admire how much you're improving and how much your art is changing for the better.
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Thank you! ^ ^ The muzzle was big, bc At first I had her mouth open with a fire fly on her tongue xD then i changed it.
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Ahh. I still think it's amazing work, regardless :3
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Dude this is freaking awesome..
I don't see anything wrong with the muzzle, eeven though people said it was too big o_o
I really love the eye,the ears,
And the way of shading.
Amaaaziiinnggg ; ;..
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Немного великовата нижняя часть мордочки, а так - отличная работа^^
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Спасибо ^ ^ (жаль, если мой русский немного ржавый, я не владеющим языком, на некоторое время.)
Челюсть немного большим, потому что рот кошки должен был быть открытым, но я изменил его. XD
В любом случае, еще раз спасибо <3
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its cute O: nnnehhhh Go eat cat food lucy! (sorry when I was writing this my cat was brushing herself on my arm :3)
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Ik what you used sai forrr
The little airbrush dotties
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OMIGOD 
DIS IS BEYOND EPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCCC?!?!?!?
I AM CRAY CRAY FOR THIS PICTURE
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Ty! c: Glad you like it.
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:3 *Puts as computer screen*
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