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Published: 2014-10-01 17:51:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 5533; Favourites: 191; Downloads: 74
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Because more Sunset Shimmer is never a bad thing. Also I cannot human.Still not quite comfortable with how it came out. I think it's to do with the eye shape - reminds me of those creepy dolls.
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Okay, so first, nitpicks. The ears (horse ones) look like they do not follow the curve of her head and are instead just there. Also, the lines for blush are weird seeing as you can easily see spaces between them where her normal color comes through. The skin there should at least also be tinted somewhat to red.
Bigger problems: That shoulder, arm, and hand. The shoulder looks like it is miniscule in comparison to the arm and it makes the arm look very flabby in the upper portion. It shrinks back down to a more normal size (especially compared to the whole thin style of it) but then ends with what looks like an odd hand. The hand should be slightly thicker or larger then the arm, but instead it continues to shrink, which is odd.
Finally, the face. I will agree that something seems off about it, but I can't quite figure it out. the eyes look like they are trying to be sultry but they are wide open instead (they are pretty though) and the lack of really any detail on the lips is also weird.
However, despite all of that, I like it. It is well done, the shading is nice, andminus the arm and face, it is well done. However, I wouldn't put it as a favorite or anything, and it is offset that it does just make me bite into my lip. It is good, but simply weird.
I am also not an artist, I do more writing, so take my critique with a grain of salt please.
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Very cute, though I like her better with the jacket.
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She's also a wondercolt too. She is beautiful even more without her jacket.
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Still cute with how you drew it, despite your complaints.^^
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