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Published: 2003-05-12 05:56:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description extended myogenic pause
resisting sacred cardiac laws

flowing thru flesh caves
passing by His slaves

heed the twin beat
savor flushed living heat

impulsive pinpricks
evading the red script
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Comments: 1

griffinlady [2003-05-12 06:01:58 +0000 UTC]

This is an excellent use of a difficult event to evoke the emotions. I like it though it screams to me to need more imagery. Even so, I like the idea. It always amazes me sometimes how doctors can bring a person into a number or a figure. Good capturing of that, very strong.

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