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Birdave [2017-02-25 16:03:05 +0000 UTC]
Hello my name is Dave (Birdman), I'm a friend of your mothers. She asked me if I would take a little time and read what you have posted. First off I may be a little biased.....I absolutely love Science fiction, I thought about what to say to you for quite a while and this is it, I am an Artist or at least a wannabe but from start to finish I could paint the backdrop and people with little effort!!! That is how deep you were able to immerse me into your story, that doesn't happen to me often. Well done !!!! I have always found my imagination to be far better than even the best CGI but only my dream state is of the caliber of your writing, I look forward to reading more......................Dave.
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Sir-Jayke In reply to Birdave [2017-02-26 09:01:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I appreciate it when anyone takes the time to read my work and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. That's really a very wonderful compliment and I hope you'll enjoy the rest as much as you did this first chapter.
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infoconduit [2016-10-17 05:25:32 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting and well written! Seems like what you're "hoping to create" is turning out to be just that! It's enjoyable and engaging, the characters are well-developed, and you added a great cliff-hanger at the end! Looks like I'm going to have to read more!
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Sir-Jayke In reply to infoconduit [2016-10-24 03:30:32 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love feedback, so I hope you read more and let me know what you think.
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infoconduit In reply to Sir-Jayke [2016-10-24 04:08:44 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. I will as soon as I get the chance!
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