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Published: 2010-03-07 21:49:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 5478; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 141
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dik, mam v hlave pribeh/y (iny ako tu, skor taky dieselpunk) ale nemam moc cas... v kazdom pripade je to niekde na zozname veci ktore by som chcel skusit urobit... btw ty si jeden z tych co chodia na tie drawing jamy s burningflagom, perzom atd...alebo si ta s niekym pletiem?
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Nepleties, jammujem s nimi
Si s nimi v kontakte, chodis obcas tiez? /mne sa to nie vzdy podari, tak ci sa neminame
Jasne, s casom som na tom dost rovnako, a navyse kreslenie nie je moj hlavny chlebik,
takze uplne chapem. Ten komiks co mam na galerke - Fleet - som tiez struhal po veceroch,
volnych chvilach, od minulych vianoc po tieto 
Kazdopadne drzim palce, rad by som si od Teba nejaky kukol, a ten dieselpunk znie skvele
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pred rokmi som s burningflagom robil, inych osobne nepoznam.... niekedy by som isiel ale nestihacka nicoho... snad sa niekedy zadari
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Ak sa Ti podari, bolo by super keby si niekedy dosiel, chalani su skvely
a vzdy je super atmosfera
Na fb nie som, tak nejako to bojkotujem
Uz sem chodim niekedy viac ako by bolo dobre
No a Fleet...to je moj prvy komiks co som ako tak dokoncil-aspon prvy pribeh.
Ma to celkom dobre ohlasy a kamos sa ponukol ze by to skusil vydat, tak som zvedavy co z toho bude
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pozrete, precitane... asi prvy komiks kde je obalka horsia ako vnutro
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Rok, ale nie v kuse - ked sa dalo a bola chut,
napr. v lete sme mali tolko roboty ze som dva mesiace
nespravil ani ciarku.
Dik, som rad ze sa paci
jednak to byva rychlejsie, jednak sa daju docielit
zaujimave efekty
Dobra uvaha...tak take nieco by som si rozhodne rad pozrel,
mohla by to byt fakt šupa!
Nie, nie je to tajne
pre atelier Cakov+partners /ich stranka: [link]
a popritom vlastne zakazky ked sa zadari zohnat, aj vizualizacie
a 3D modely. Kadeco
A co Ty? Kreslis/malujes/konceptujes? Ci tiez cosi kusok ine
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uplne ine... v reklamke robim
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Ale je fajn mat konicka odlisneho od roboty,
jednak je zivot stipku bohatsi, jednak mas lepsi relax
Buduci tyzden by inak asi mal byt v piatok jamm, ak chces
dam Ti info keby sa Ti dalo prist...
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Cool implementation on those grayscale colouring,really put on the mood..nice!
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haha. really nice. Love the graphic novel feel to it.
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interesting.
What sort of technic did you use ?
It seems to be 3D with a sort of toon shader render.
am I wrong ?
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actually... it was painted in photoshop
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nice control of perspective. always adds some realism to a illustration, even one as graphic as this.
There seems to be a typo at the bottom, should it say "It was really hard to..."
looks like you left the first letter off.
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thanks for correction!
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Good clean work. Great shapes and I like the cool colours.
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...cool stuff. Reminds me on the Dark Empire StarWars comic by Gosset/Whatshisname. Any chance of there being more of it? I am DYING to get my hands on a dark/noir Scifi comic!
Keep up the cool work!
Cheers,
M.
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thanks!
to your question: i will make some more pages... but probably just for portfolio - i dont see any real chance to make complete comics. At takes a lot of time and i cannot afford it.
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Thanks for the info - I can understand. Take care!
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Yep, you definitely need to get better fonts (maybe differentiate narration boxes from dialogues). You also need to refine the speech bubbles and the narration boxes to be more like real comics (for eg. speech boxes are usually more like rounded rectangles than ellipses, borders are more like hand-drawn, and the color for narration boxes is yellow/sand).
There were great tutorials about that on PHWOnline, but, unfortunately, the site was abandoned and went down. You could probably find something on the internet archive about various typography and bubble tutorials.
In any case, the art it's still awesome as always! You could try to make short stories if you are not confortable with classical comic books.
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nice! I think you should develop into a full comic
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like tyson i also noticed that. but the 5 is best interpreted as an S so it becomes wtf's xD
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Whiskey Tango Five is not a coincidence
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idéš skééétch!
bolo len otázkou času, kedy sa vrhneš do živého komixu a strašne moc sa na to teším
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dik, ale komix z toho asi nebude, toto je len skuska...
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neopová? sa! toto nerob. u? si ma tak ne?havil a toto mi teraz spraví??! nebu? tak krutý
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the truth is that it looks pretty damn good, contrasting with the description. You could maybe try a different approach on showing the character of the place.
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you probably mean that it is not dirty etc... well from long distance it looks quite ok and you can see just the structure.
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Aj tak si myslím, že keby miestami potrháš tie tiene vyjadrovalo by to charakter toho miesta lepšie. Alebo ako som hovoril predtým, keď hovoríš ako je niečo zničené musí s tým korešpondovať aj scéna. To je skoro ako keby si hovoril o spaľovacom motore a nakreslil k tomu mamuta. Dobrý ťah bol napríklad ten space junk čo tam je, vybral by som sa aj tým smerom. Inak vyzerá fakt dobre, páči sa mi tá železná kostra.
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akurat ze nehovorim ze je to znicene
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myslím, že veľmi dobre vieš ako som to myslel
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it is just some kind of test if i can do it... Right now i will probably make just some pages. Not sure if i will ever make a complete comic book...
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There's a load of great free comic book fonts at Blambot [link] -- try using one of them, I think they look much better than awful old Comic Sans!
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thanks, i will definitely check it, i am not very good with typography
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I love how the ship's designation Whiskey Tango Five WTF if you keep five as a word instead of making it a number.
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Jo, líbí se mi to... ale možná bych přidal pár lidiček na tu plošinu
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Not bad, though in all honesty I don't care much for the background. Looks interesting though.
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thanks, characters coming soon
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