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Sketching-J — Final Chapter to this Anime
Published: 2018-10-11 01:58:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 504; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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AT LEAST WE GET TO SEE A KAIJU FIGHT ANOTHER KAIJU IN THIS MOVIE.Related content
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Alright... Here's my critique!
I can see the amount of effort in this artwork, and it looks like you tried REALLY hard! Which is good!! I'm a bit confused at the hair, as it has lines in it, to make it more detailed (I sometimes do that too don't worry haha.) but a few of them connect a bit weirdly?? I would focus more on a type of hairline, where hair would be falling down their face, like in real life.
For the bodies, you did hands decently well!! I applaud you ^^ Though, I feel like there could be a bit more... Shape in the fingers and bodies? They look just a little stiff, which is a huge artist habit, but it's normal, and eventually, with practice, that'll improve! (I wish you the best of luck, it took me years... 0.0)
I like the glow effects! It really adds extra everythign to the drawing, as it's really eye-catching!
Anyway, I hope my crit helped you. I'm always trying to help out other artists looking to improve in their artowkr, all while trying to do the same for me at the same time!! <3
Good luck on future works!
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