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Sketching-J — [Jurassic World: Fallen Kingdom] Indoraptor
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Published: 2018-07-17 08:18:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 605; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Indomitable Theif.Related content
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Hey! The colouring on the eye looks really great, and the background looks pretty cool as well. I think the anatomy of this person could use some improvement. For example, a human's forehead actually takes up quite a but of space in the humans' head, but in your drawing its relatively small. A simple way to fix this is by using a reference, so try looking at a picture of a person looking sideways. Another thing is the streak of brown/yellow hair. Since every part of your drawing has line art, it would make sense to add an outline to that part as well. (hope that makes sense lol) Overall, this looks really cool! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Outstanding background, and I reallly like the sharpness of the teeth. But, the shading and lineart is a bit shaky. The nose is a bit to far up then it should be, and it should extrude a tad more out. The hair mark is really distracting, it looks like a stain, I believe the artist used the spray paint tool to create this, and I think I know what they were going for, a blotch of orange sidebang. I tried this aswell and yes it turned out exctatlly like this, a smudge. Overall change the brush for the sidebang and be a bit more slower with lineart and shading. But overall this peice is superiour to what some of the stuff I have made -Lol20066 <3
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