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MariaEnzianiaKober [2017-07-06 08:35:41 +0000 UTC]
Looks quite good... But it gives a bit of a sad expression to me. Is that wanted?
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Sketching707 In reply to MariaEnzianiaKober [2017-07-06 19:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! (^_^)
Not really but even I noticed that. Do you have any advice as to how I can make it seem happy?
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MariaEnzianiaKober In reply to Sketching707 [2017-07-06 19:40:36 +0000 UTC]
I think there are two factors (althogh I would not call myself that much of an expert on eyes)
1. The eyebrow: if you make it a bit more "curved up", it would look happier I think.
2. is the eyelid, with the same as in 1. It is quite "straight".
Both of them seem to "push" down on the eye - and adding to that, the eye looks quite "watery" with all the reflections. It is somewhat hard to describe what I mean, without having an example >.<
The next thing you could try (additionally) is to not have any eyewhite on the bottom of the eye.
Hope this helps, expressing what I mean is not that easy XP
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Sketching707 In reply to MariaEnzianiaKober [2017-07-11 10:43:24 +0000 UTC]
That makes so much sense! Thank you so much, I will keep all these things in mind when I again try to draw an eye! (^_^)
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Spiraxy [2017-06-30 18:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Thats a pretty good eye
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