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Published: 2012-02-05 06:53:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 749; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 16
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I cannot think, I cannot say.My love for you must not betray.
I cannot touch, I cannot claim.
My body demands, so much shame.
I cannot breathe, I cannot see.
The sight, and scent of thee.
I cannot live, so shall I die?
Leaving you with questions, wondering why?
I wish to tell you what is real.
But logic states we Vulcans cannot feel.
Forget me not when I am gone.
As my heart beats its final song.
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He should hug him. Thanks for commenting.
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I wish there was a scene of Jim hugging him
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Such emotion and bitterness in Spock's words.... Such tension within him, such struggle
And that picture you chose to illustrate your poem fits so well
I really love that one.
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Thanks. I wrote this a few years ago and forgot to upload it on the Kirk/Spock group. It was emotional for me to write this piece. Spock is truly suffering.
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From what I've seen you like to submit the Spirk poems you wrote along the years bit by bit on the Spirk group and I enjoy it quite a lot ^^
So emotional indeed. Poor Spock *hugs him tenderly until he relax a bit*
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My, how it amazes me about how gifted you are c: I justlove not only your poems but YOU! <3
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Well, that made my universe. Very kind of you.
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Wow! This is so emotional, I feel so bad for Spock. I wish I could give him a hug!
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Totally unrelated, but I love your name. It's awesome and true.
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Ah thanks...it is emotional ain't it....poor guy....
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