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Published: 2011-04-12 08:55:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 485; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Description A heart beats boom, boom,



From his chest,



A heart beats thud, thud,



From his side,



A lingering look.



A touch.



A smile.



Those eyes.



That brow.



Angled so right,



That smile again.



Thud, thud.



Boom, boom
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Comments: 3

elfqueen55 [2011-04-12 13:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Why are you so damned GOOD??? Sacre bleu!!

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slashygirl In reply to elfqueen55 [2011-04-12 14:49:03 +0000 UTC]

This was my first poem without rhyme. So scared to attempt it. Thanks for thinking it was good...means so much to me..so little words can say so much.

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elfqueen55 In reply to slashygirl [2011-04-12 15:58:30 +0000 UTC]

But that's the beauty of real poetry...economy of words, simple phrasing that says so much about what the poet and the reader are feeling...a true symbiosis of the two! And your talent continually shines right through!

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